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Published: 2006-04-16 19:34:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 569; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 24
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Description aching, breaking
   the already
shattered glass.
shaking
quake of breath
lingering dust

  just

like this
  ashtray

crash

   if you

may.

abyss of solitude
deafblinddumb

numb

apocalypse of faith
nearing the cave
shelter
i crave
safe & sound
rumor the lost
have been found

spin

   me

around.

caricature i lost
indecent transaction
fraction
my numbers
divide this by
two

calculation of

truth

      & lies

toothfairy
was mistaken

   for

fireflies
  lost in the
night

shhhh... sleep tight.
let go and hold
          on.

not for long
please -
just remember

  the wrong...

always  forgetting

the right.
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Comments: 37

Angel-Soul [2006-08-17 20:56:31 +0000 UTC]

All of the spaces thrown me a little, I did once have a great love for them. But then I changed somewhat.

Anyway, I do like it. Sometimes it feels like you're just throwing random words together, but if I looked harder I could probably understand why they were there.

This is my favourite part:

toothfairy
was mistaken

for

fireflies
lost in the
night

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neo-tek [2006-07-20 02:41:00 +0000 UTC]

i love this...format, content...style...

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to neo-tek [2006-07-23 04:59:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you so very much you favouriting something of mine always means so much to me. it is an honour

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neo-tek In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-08-01 08:04:38 +0000 UTC]

anytime you have some seriosuly good work!

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Screamingscars [2006-04-26 22:43:33 +0000 UTC]

omfg - cwazay awesome!!! :jawdropping: snap girlie.

lova lova you dearly.

just wow....nearly my favorite of all your work that i've seen.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to Screamingscars [2006-04-30 20:14:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you emma my love

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Screamingscars In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-04-30 22:20:42 +0000 UTC]

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molly-ness [2006-04-18 10:29:42 +0000 UTC]

nice pic! the poem is so tragically beautiful and drips with your mark...i love it! hang in there...it's always darkest before the sun rises. good to hear from you

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to molly-ness [2006-04-30 20:16:59 +0000 UTC]

oh molly your comments truly mean a great deal to me. thank you so much

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molly-ness In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-05-01 05:39:21 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome hun

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stabbedbycupid [2006-04-18 05:45:02 +0000 UTC]

beautiful. amazing layout. I'm rather speachless.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to stabbedbycupid [2006-04-30 20:16:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much love. you are a beautiful support.

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FrederickNeeds [2006-04-17 21:05:50 +0000 UTC]

Pefect as always.
I always love your soundings.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to FrederickNeeds [2006-04-30 20:15:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much sir fredrick

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rider-on-the-storm [2006-04-17 19:26:55 +0000 UTC]

lovely little way you set this up.
i would tell you all of my favorite parts...but i would just re-type all of it!
amazing as always.
i hope everything is ok

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2006-04-30 20:15:42 +0000 UTC]

i love you mr. rider

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judylee [2006-04-17 03:38:20 +0000 UTC]

i was hoping this wasnt what i thought it was, now i am thinking it is am i wrong? Excellent writing very subtle yet potent

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to judylee [2006-04-17 12:15:32 +0000 UTC]

its about joey.

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judylee In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-04-17 16:48:13 +0000 UTC]

ahhh, ic , i can see that now so deep and moving.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to judylee [2006-04-30 20:15:25 +0000 UTC]

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judylee In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-05-01 00:18:29 +0000 UTC]

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mirrin [2006-04-17 01:19:40 +0000 UTC]

A wonderful piece of writing... which I am seeing far to little of these days.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to mirrin [2006-04-30 20:16:34 +0000 UTC]

you are too sweet mirrin... thank you so very much.

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mirrin In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-05-01 02:28:50 +0000 UTC]

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judylee [2006-04-17 00:00:52 +0000 UTC]

seems again deep and sad to me, i sure hope you have found your
"shelter
i crave
safe & sound
rumor the lost
have been found" such deep and profound work i am always astounded by you.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to judylee [2006-04-30 20:20:46 +0000 UTC]

love you

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judylee In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-05-01 00:17:02 +0000 UTC]

love you too my baby doll

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Riyllan [2006-04-16 23:00:46 +0000 UTC]

No shit... fine writting....

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to Riyllan [2006-04-30 20:17:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much riyllan... how are you these days?

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Riyllan In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-05-01 19:10:41 +0000 UTC]

Ang... I'm fine.. But I miss the heck out of you

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to Riyllan [2006-05-06 03:07:28 +0000 UTC]

sorry life is buuuussssyyyyy

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realcoolrain [2006-04-16 19:59:24 +0000 UTC]

great work, makes me think of the fractured nature of many relationships, off on up down, not a lot of plateaus...

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to realcoolrain [2006-04-30 20:17:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you dearly for the comment... i am glad you felt this

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paleypeach [2006-04-16 19:37:31 +0000 UTC]

Very nice job, I like the images the poem presents.. esp the tooth fairy firefly part..
There are a couple of misspellings, apocalypse and caricature.. but other than that, very nicely done.
I dunnoe why it appeals to me so much.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to paleypeach [2006-04-30 20:20:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much, i surely wish i had gotten to this sooner :blushing: lol, thank you so much for the corrections i didn't even think to look them up i am very glad you could feel my work. thank you so much.

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dex-the-party-chika [2006-04-16 19:36:39 +0000 UTC]

Gosh. I love how you put this together.

"apocolypse of faith
nearing the cave
shelter
i crave
safe & sound
rumor the lost
have been found"

aw. I Love that part.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to dex-the-party-chika [2006-04-30 20:20:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much sweet dex

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