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pierrebernut — Kalaelen - Walking Pose
Published: 2006-09-27 02:20:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 4523; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 5
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Colored version of the walking pose from my model sheet.Related content
Comments: 15
I really like the whole turn-out of the pic. The colouring is beautifully done and I like the background. The pose is very alluring and dangerous. Nice job!! 
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I like what you did with the background. The pose is very good.
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that's a very good drawing ^^ i like it, especially the funky skin tight outfit =3
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Not too bad. The costume is very innovative, I like it. Technically, the lineart should probably be thinner and smoother. Her arms should probably be a bit thicker; right now they look like there's no meat on the bones. The right hand (left side looking at it) looks really awkward how it's grasping the sword. I think in that case the sword would be pointed backwards, thus you'd have a foreshortening effect going on. Her foreward leg is too skinny at the knee; the knee is usually fairly think, even on a cartooned woman. And finally, her breasts are a bit too round and front-facing; you should be seeing them in somewhat of a profile since her chest is turned slightly away. I do like the color of her eyes. A thinner lineart would help those stand out more.
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thanks a lot buddy
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no problem. A decent critique is worth a thousand "ooooooh thats pretty!"'s
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The picture looks good, definitely has the concept art look. Just one critique: the sword and the right hand are at an impossible angle, it would look more natural if it was held similarly to the left hand, and the sword going behind the character. Keep up the good work!
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