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Published: 2012-02-13 12:22:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 203; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 5
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This is Johannes and this could be any other ordinary workday.Except that it's September.
Now September in and on itself is no unlike any other month, workwise, and this day no different from the rest.
Truly Johannes cares not to notice the months go by, or the seasons. So he really doesn't know it's September, yet. He only ever differs between working days and holidays but this particular September is not like those other Septembers.
He just doesn't know it.
Today Johannes gets up like usual.
His wife, who's a journalist, is already up and halfway through her coffee. She will leave three minutes after he takes a seat while he bides his time for another half an hour.
But this is September.
He ties his red tie and grabs his brown jacket, it will hang on the chair. There is a calendar on the wall. No one has changed it so it's still on August.
It is September.
(THE September)
Walking into the kitchen he faces the prelude to everything.
The start of his September.
His wife with half signed papers.
"I'm divorcing you, Johannes."
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Well i think it will be fine either way..
but i want to read moooore! >.
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It kind of sounds like a 9/11 story... Is it?
Besides that, it is a good starting point. It could go towards anything from here. Turning it into a comic could work... and I at least think that you should try, if so only because it would be a good exercise.
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Besides, even though it's written in english, the stage is set in modern day Sweden so it's an impossibility.
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Well you never know.
Besides, just because you're a swede doesn't mean that 9/11 didn't have any impact on your life. (Not that I am one to talk, I loled... >_>)
What song is your inspiration?
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True but it makes no sense that it would have an impact eleven years later. . .just saying.
Songs name is Consolation Prizes by Phoenix
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No it isn't. I forgot about that incident ages ago.
September is because of the song I have as inspiration.
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It looks great in written form! But it would probably be just as good if you made it into a comic....
Hard choice, I guess.
Either way I'd love to see more of this!
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Yeh. . .writing is difficult because it has a tendency to never get done. . .then again I've never tried to make a serious long running comic before so I dunno about that.
Thinking I might make some parts in comic and some parts in writing and then maybe some parts both. . .because I think I've made up my mind to not turn this into a full novel.
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