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Pingk-NC β€” Death-bringer
Published: 2010-05-04 17:45:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description The door won't open,
You're locked inside,
The telly on repeat,
With that death-bringer scene.

The walls begin to move,
And the rain pounding harder,
You panic.

With your back against the wall,
You push,
As the sides come closing in.

With your back against the wall,
You fight,
As the sides inch ever-closer.

With your back against the wall,
You struggle,
As the sides begin to crush.

The lightning strikes twice,
And the thunder roars its call,

You curl and you cry,
As the walls begin to slow,

Claustrophobia creeping in,
As the walls begin to crumble,

The roof smashes to dust, and
You look up to the sky,
Then to your horror,
You stare,
As the death-bringer comes…
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Comments: 6

ChildrenOfPain [2010-05-18 20:38:08 +0000 UTC]

That's some nice entrance from the death bringer.

Very dramatic scenery, I like it!

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Pingk-NC In reply to ChildrenOfPain [2010-05-19 08:19:43 +0000 UTC]

xD Thanks, the image was the main thing I was trying to get across.

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ChildrenOfPain In reply to Pingk-NC [2010-05-19 17:24:29 +0000 UTC]

Well done once again

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Pingk-NC In reply to ChildrenOfPain [2010-05-19 17:34:17 +0000 UTC]

Haha, you're too kind!

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Avenvia [2010-05-04 17:48:17 +0000 UTC]

Great work. I like the structure and the imagery is excellent

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Pingk-NC In reply to Avenvia [2010-05-04 19:52:48 +0000 UTC]

Thankies very much xD

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