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Published: 2010-02-14 19:40:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2464; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Description Contest Entry for 's contest
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Character- Shoji Hakure
Original Universe- Protector Shoji

Update- Didn't make the finalist cut....but I did get dubbed an "Fantastic Contender". Which is quiet the honor considering this piece represented a lot of new firsts for me.
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Shoji stood in the doorway. Her hands trembled. The rain’s soft percussion filled the void. Iruka rested his hand on her bare shoulders.

“Shoji… it doesn't have to be like this…”

“I have no choice now, Iruka. Ptalmon… the book…they destroyed everything. My past, my planet, my family. I have nothing left to cling to. ”

“You have me. You’ve always had me.”

Shoji turned but could not face him.

“…this was a mistake. I can’t ask you to follow me any longer. You will only end up a liability….or a casualty. I don‘t need anymore blood on my hands.”

Iruka griped Shoji’s face, forcing their eyes to meet. His green depths penetrated her .

“You never had to ask, Shoji! I’m doing this because I lo- care about you! ”

Shoji roughly shoved Iruka back and turned to exit once more.

“Better take your feelings elsewhere, Iruka. I don’t have time for them. I’m leaving in fifteen. I leave with or with out you.”

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Shoji Stats-
Age- Saga 1- 13 Saga 2- 18 Saga 3- 26
Height: 5’ 2”
Weight: 135lbs
Hair: Black
Eyes: Violet
Race: Sapien
Element: Darkness and Light
Birth Planet: Nexis
Home Planet: Sapient
Employment: Pangean Special Ops
Schooling: Kenica Renard Academy
Weapon of Choice: Twin daggers
Personality/Mission:
Abandoned as an infant and orphaned by her foster family during an interplanetary war…tragedy is no stranger to Shoji Hakure. Not being the type to sit back and let those responsible for her bloody past take over the rest of the Blue System , she is on a mission to get her revenge.

A little about the universe-
Shoji comes from the Blue System. A system of 7 habitable planets. Each planet as it’s own race and planetary government.

Elysian
Vontni
Pangea
Gomi
Nexis
Sapient
Vexia

Prior to the main plot of the story, a large war takes place between Sapient and Nexis over access past the Ceres Line ( an asteroid belt that falls between Nexis and Gomi). The battle rages and Nexis almost falls…till a strange man from Vexia makes an appearance.

He guarantees Nexis victory if they help him locate “The Book of Power”. If they can locate it, he can harness it’s power to win the war.

Nexis agrees…and with that agreement sparks the rest of our story.

A little about Shoji and the contest entry piece-

Shoji is crouched ready to fight. Her two blades, one of light and the other of darkness, are by her side. Behind her on the top right is Sapient, a planet she once called home. On the bottom left is Pangea, her new home. She must protect it at all costs. Below her on the right is “The Book of Power” the instrument of Sapient’s demise. And above her left is a representation of her inner sadness….a weakness she must keep hidden from friend and foe alike.

I’ve always been a fan of a good revenge story…but never a fan of how the characters never really grow as people.

So, I came up with a heroine that is not only, strong and mission driven….but is also human. Through the course of the story we see her grow from a revenge driven individual to something much more dynamic.
I can’t go in to too much detail about the plot ( because this is all being revamped for a comic soon…and I don’t want to give anything too juicy away. ^_^).


A little about Shoji and I-

I came up with Shoji and the PS universe when I was about 13 or so. The (slightly embarrassing) excerpt is from an unedited draft of PS I wrote when I was 17. The story has taken many forms…scripts, novels, art….but this year , finally, I am really ready to share it with the world as a comic! So, entering this contest was my way of pushing myself to start. I hope you enjoy it!
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Comments: 26

limpan93 [2010-02-26 13:07:04 +0000 UTC]

This one is great! If you win that contest It'd look awesome as a sculpure (because that's the prize right), valued to over 1,000.. wow

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pinkplaidrobot In reply to limpan93 [2010-02-26 20:27:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! ^_^

I hope I win...honestly, the honorable mention is amazing too! ^_^

Thank you for the support, hun! ^_~

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ZeroConfidence [2010-02-24 20:26:44 +0000 UTC]

Nice style of artwork, and very awesome work indeed. Ha ha!

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pinkplaidrobot In reply to ZeroConfidence [2010-02-24 21:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you SO VERY much!!!!

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ZeroConfidence In reply to pinkplaidrobot [2010-02-24 22:57:13 +0000 UTC]

No problem, keep up the good work.

Checked out the rest of your gallery, very cute works indeed. You have an interesting art style. So watching you now, so looking forward to stuff you have to show in the future.

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pinkplaidrobot In reply to ZeroConfidence [2010-02-26 20:28:28 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!! Thank you so much for the watch and the complement!!!

*BLUSH* I'll try not to disappoint! ^_^

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ZeroConfidence In reply to pinkplaidrobot [2010-02-27 04:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Indeed, keep up the great work. Your fans are watching and enjoying all you have to do, work on, and show.

Also, do you take request? I do try my best to find talented people with unique art styles to work on my original character, Zero Confidence. I'm trying my best to get her known around DA. So spreading the word as best as I can. Ha ha!

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pinkplaidrobot In reply to ZeroConfidence [2010-02-28 19:06:59 +0000 UTC]

I do...but I may not be able to get to it right away.

But I will try!

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ZeroConfidence In reply to pinkplaidrobot [2010-02-28 19:29:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh no problem, I wouldn't expect a request to get done in a few days. It's always the artist choice if they are even going to take or do request work at all. So even if you said no, it would be alright as I would respect your choice as an artist. Of course if you do the request, I would be ever so thankful and I'll be sure to tell all my friends about your great artwork. Get you more page views and watches maybe for sure. Ha ha!

So I guess I'll be sending you a note then about the details of my original character, Zero Confidence.

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xenokurisu [2010-02-22 22:25:13 +0000 UTC]

Really good work! <3

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pinkplaidrobot In reply to xenokurisu [2010-02-24 21:31:26 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU!!!

Your words mean the world to me!!!

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ElectricGecko [2010-02-15 03:23:16 +0000 UTC]

Cool action-packed pose!

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pinkplaidrobot In reply to ElectricGecko [2010-02-15 04:33:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you,sir! ^_^

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pheonixwing [2010-02-14 23:21:41 +0000 UTC]

You did a great job on it, I love the coloring ^_^ So pretty

I love the character and the pose too! Hope you win!

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pinkplaidrobot In reply to pheonixwing [2010-02-15 04:33:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!!

I hope so, too....

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tifa-bells [2010-02-14 23:01:02 +0000 UTC]

woohooo hun this is FAB!!! i dont think im gonna have time to enter so i hope you win!!!

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pinkplaidrobot In reply to tifa-bells [2010-02-15 04:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! ^_^

Awe...moo...I was looking forward to your entry...if you have time you really should, hun! Your girls are awesome! ^_^

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tifa-bells In reply to pinkplaidrobot [2010-02-15 14:39:18 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm i will try and whip something together

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pinkplaidrobot In reply to tifa-bells [2010-02-15 18:06:47 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!!!

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IrisLuminMiel [2010-02-14 22:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is such a wonderful drawing! The eyes are really pretty..

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pinkplaidrobot In reply to IrisLuminMiel [2010-02-15 04:34:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! ^_^

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IrisLuminMiel In reply to pinkplaidrobot [2010-02-15 13:41:17 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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AlienShores [2010-02-14 22:04:36 +0000 UTC]

I don't think it's too long - maybe just the upper arm - but if you imagine that your elbow generally falls at the bottom of your ribcage and your hand at your crotch - it doesn't look too wonky to me.

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pinkplaidrobot In reply to AlienShores [2010-02-14 22:33:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, hun! *cries tears of relief*

I was really worried about it...I'm glad it doesn't jump off the page as wonky...

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AlienShores [2010-02-14 21:19:24 +0000 UTC]

Well, I especially like her eyes and you did a good job with the glow from her firey dagger! Looks pretty good!

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pinkplaidrobot In reply to AlienShores [2010-02-14 21:25:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

Her eyes were fun to color...I don't normally add that much detail to them...but I figured I would do my best...so yeah... ^_^

I was a little worried about the daggers...the glow on her skin and shirt didn't come out as well as I would have hoped...so your kind words mean A LOT! ^_^

I think I brought out her right arm too far...and it's still too long...(just noticed this after its colored and posted...moo)...Hopefully, next time I draw this type of pose get it down pat. ^_^

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