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'Oh, one more thing…’ he leaned down and plucked a blossoming twig of myrtle. He sniffed it and the handed it to Ciri with a bow. ‘Reconciliation,’ he said shortly. ‘An apology for careless words. Va Faill, luned.’ He quickly left and soon the ground shook as the majority of his band left.‘Don’t tell me,’ Ciri snarled,’ that I would have to have… to have, with him… If it is, then never ever…’
‘No,’ Avallac’h said unhurried. ‘It will not be him. Calm down.’
Ciri moved the myrtle closer to her face, so that Avallac’h would not noticed the excitement and fascination that enveloped her.’
‘I am calm.’
Eredin Bréacc Glas
I always loved this guy
November 2018
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A very superb and very striking drawing in how the drawing is executed. (Yes, I sound repetitive in many of my comments in other drawings, I think I should expand my dictionary).
Starting in the anatomical structure of Eredin: It is very striking in how it is drawn both in its anatomy and in its expression that is proportionate to realism. How the strokes are drawn on the hair and how the shadows are made. It is a very dynamic achromatic drawing.
You have a great talent for drawing
Thank you very much for the kind words and the watch - very encouraging!
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First of all I want to say it's wonderful that you are The Witcher's fan, becasue I'm also, however I haven't played the game, just have read books. Second thing is, I love that you draw in traditional!
About drawing itself, I think it is good. You did correct proportions in the face, the space between eyes is good, the height of face is also ok. Nonetheless there are a few issues that I want to point out now.
First, you could erase help lines where they are visible, for example on cheeks and less on the forehead.
Second, I would suggest to soften lines for shading or even try to blend shadows on the face and the neck, so overall the drawing won't give so harsh impression. I suggest using paper tissue for blending.
Third thing are hair, I know they are very difficult to draw and very requiring, however you could try to use different hardenss of pencils from 8B to even 2H and put different pressure on different part of them, because now I suppose you used only one pencil and made whole hairstyle with same looking lanes. Here is Tutorial how to draw hair.
I suggest to take a piece of paper, several different pencils from 8B to Hb or H and try it out.
I'm really impressed how you did the lips, they are beautiful and very soft-looking! It is the effect that I would like to see on the face also!
This comment is just my opinion and I hope it will be helpful.
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Yes, it's immensely helpful! Thank you so much!
And greetings to a fellow Witcher fan - I'm also the one from the books!
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I'm glad you like it and can't wait for your new drawing!
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Overall, this looks great. What I'm wondering about is, are the eyes a bit too high for human standards? Still, it looks attractive, so if the proportions are off, it's nothing major. The pencil strokes seem relaxed, that's a good thing.
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Thank you kindly!
As for the eyes: of course, you are right. Technically though, he's not really a human (but an attractive elf with enormous, "almond-shaped" eyes, as described in the book ). Still though, point taken 
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Elves might justify straying from the bounds of human anatomy. The main thing is it looks believable. You did great.
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