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PyroKismet [2010-05-19 10:44:35 +0000 UTC]
ooh that looks great! <333
I love it all!
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DrawWithLaura [2010-04-29 02:58:11 +0000 UTC]
OH! And the writing doesn't look like its ON his skin, how his shoulder blade and his body leaning away doesn't change the perspective of the letters, try working on that! :3
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DrawWithLaura [2010-04-29 02:57:20 +0000 UTC]
Okay, I understand they are in a sad/slouched position but the shoulder still looks un-realistic, yu dont want to raise it TO much and keep it curved, not having sharp edges adds to the mood of the picture.
So I drew this for you to help with the shoulder a bit:: [link]
The only other thing is I desperatly do not like the writing on him. I dont know if its my taste or if it doesn't "work" maybe its to bright? Messy? I'm not sure, either way, I think it would look better without it.
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3PJ [2010-04-03 22:03:24 +0000 UTC]
I really like his hair.
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