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Poet-no-06 — He wanted her

Published: 2012-08-18 21:54:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 674; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 6
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Description This piece is for the 's group birthday contest! hope you all enjoy! Sorry for the Slight blurriness this is one of the longer pieces ^o^"

If you're not familiar with my Red and Black poems heres a quick explanation:
you can read BOTH the red and black OR ONLY the RED

THE WORDS I USED ARE: Back, where, dreams, breathed, dance, forget, wasted, parched, heart, kiss,
Sorry I don't think i could italicize the words ^^"
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Comments: 19

PanicRawr [2012-09-29 05:51:31 +0000 UTC]

this is perfect -melts

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Poet-no-06 In reply to PanicRawr [2012-09-29 05:56:08 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks

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PanicRawr In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-09-29 06:19:04 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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Sammur-amat [2012-09-23 18:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Okay let me start off y saying what a wonderful, original concept this piece has, the visual and sense of the poem leave the reader with quite a lot to linger on. Excellent, excellent job, dear one!

If there is only one comment I would leave would be if I may suggest you try re-uploading a less blurry version of the piece as really, this piece deserves to shine as bright as possible

You made such a lovely use of the words and really, this is a greatly deserved win!
Once again, congratulations, I'm totally gonna be watching you!

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Poet-no-06 In reply to Sammur-amat [2012-09-24 06:19:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks soo much for the watch! And yeaaa I don't have a very good camera, like the first few of my pieces were taken from a DSi camera ^^" and just recently i got a bloggie (a sony version of the flip cam) I'd be super happy if i could get all of my pieces not blurry

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Sammur-amat In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-09-25 16:02:08 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome!
Ah, I myself only have a camera phone to work with so I quite share your pain.
If you ever do repost though, kindly note me!

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Poet-no-06 In reply to Sammur-amat [2012-09-25 17:07:09 +0000 UTC]

haha yeaa and of of course I'll note you

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Sammur-amat In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-09-25 17:11:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very kindly!

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Poet-no-06 In reply to Sammur-amat [2012-09-26 02:06:32 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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Sammur-amat In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-09-26 02:10:21 +0000 UTC]

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BloodyBrownies [2012-09-03 23:42:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I've certainly never read poetry with your red and black idea. Very nice! It made me pause for a second!!

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Poet-no-06 In reply to BloodyBrownies [2012-09-04 02:49:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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KirstenJacob [2012-08-24 08:07:41 +0000 UTC]

haha. This I like.

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Poet-no-06 In reply to KirstenJacob [2012-08-24 08:10:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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justanyonearound [2012-08-23 16:21:20 +0000 UTC]

O.O the reds..

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Poet-no-06 In reply to justanyonearound [2012-08-24 02:29:57 +0000 UTC]

lol after reading it again it does seem like O.O

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justanyonearound In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-08-24 10:22:28 +0000 UTC]

XD

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froggycrp739 [2012-08-22 01:36:08 +0000 UTC]

That is really cool

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Poet-no-06 In reply to froggycrp739 [2012-08-22 06:46:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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