x-kill-kiss-x [2006-01-15 09:35:48 +0000 UTC]
This so beautiful, so perfect...well done
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courierXangel [2005-10-18 12:34:42 +0000 UTC]
Aww... I like the repeated them... Where art thou Romeo? ;___; I would only suggest shortening a few lines, so they won't overpower the smaller lines. x]] It's very good though.
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poetry-trumpeteer In reply to courierXangel [2005-10-18 22:58:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the feedback...I'll try to fix it...
courierXangel In reply to poetry-trumpeteer [2005-10-19 02:56:07 +0000 UTC]
Oki doki x]] You're welcome, too