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Poetrymann — Oblivion

Published: 2011-12-05 15:27:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 26003; Favourites: 569; Downloads: 349
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Description That kind of beauty
can haunt a life
and ruin a man,
the incandescent taste of skin
so fair it flouts
a summer day
and taunts the bed clothes
as if to say
this is but a borrowed pleasure;
the supple lilt of hips
making wastrels of my senses
and savoring the scent
of flesh entrapping secrets
like a summer solstice;

and that last wave of wonder
puckered in a silken crescent
breaking over me
into oblivion.
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Comments: 101

Poetrymann In reply to ??? [2012-05-24 23:58:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks always for your support!

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DameOdessa In reply to Poetrymann [2012-05-25 09:01:09 +0000 UTC]

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Ellyevans679 [2012-01-04 09:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Lovely
Elle

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Poetrymann In reply to Ellyevans679 [2012-01-07 23:03:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks - I am glad you like it!

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wolfcreek50 [2011-12-11 07:00:02 +0000 UTC]

Superb work...

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Poetrymann In reply to wolfcreek50 [2011-12-18 01:08:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I am very glad you like it! Happy Holidays.

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wolfcreek50 In reply to Poetrymann [2012-04-17 06:56:51 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome my friend...

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CrystalTearz55 [2011-12-09 21:43:45 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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Poetrymann In reply to CrystalTearz55 [2011-12-13 14:22:27 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks - I am very glad you like it.

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LikeTheDaisies [2011-12-09 00:47:52 +0000 UTC]

GORGEOUS.

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Poetrymann In reply to LikeTheDaisies [2011-12-10 23:21:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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moon-sorceress [2011-12-08 05:20:50 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of Helen of Troy.

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Poetrymann In reply to moon-sorceress [2011-12-10 23:20:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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jimfleming [2011-12-08 01:13:09 +0000 UTC]

What a way to go.....Luscious imagery, written and otherwise...

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Poetrymann In reply to jimfleming [2011-12-10 23:20:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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jimfleming In reply to Poetrymann [2011-12-11 03:19:47 +0000 UTC]

con mucho gusto

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xxEtherealGirlxx [2011-12-07 22:18:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is great!

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Poetrymann In reply to xxEtherealGirlxx [2011-12-10 23:19:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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rt364 [2011-12-07 01:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful and sensual. Thank you.

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Poetrymann In reply to rt364 [2011-12-10 23:19:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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scarletwave [2011-12-07 00:50:14 +0000 UTC]

Once more these words you write are generously perfect.

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Poetrymann In reply to scarletwave [2011-12-10 23:19:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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DesireeMoore [2011-12-06 17:00:27 +0000 UTC]

absolutley beautiful

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Poetrymann In reply to DesireeMoore [2011-12-10 23:18:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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DesireeMoore In reply to Poetrymann [2011-12-11 06:19:07 +0000 UTC]

you are more then welcome sir

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noor-lg77 [2011-12-06 16:50:47 +0000 UTC]

Very nice
and Perfect Work

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Poetrymann In reply to noor-lg77 [2011-12-10 23:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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Momotte2 [2011-12-06 16:39:00 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful work !

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Poetrymann In reply to Momotte2 [2011-12-10 23:18:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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when-i-caught-myself [2011-12-06 12:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem. Great work!

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Poetrymann In reply to when-i-caught-myself [2011-12-10 23:18:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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JaquillynModel [2011-12-06 10:42:54 +0000 UTC]

beautiful...

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Poetrymann In reply to JaquillynModel [2011-12-10 23:18:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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mirkoemir [2011-12-06 08:34:08 +0000 UTC]

Really good! from metric to sence. I love it.

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Poetrymann In reply to mirkoemir [2011-12-10 23:18:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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lourdoss [2011-12-06 06:22:05 +0000 UTC]

excellent friend

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Poetrymann In reply to lourdoss [2011-12-10 23:18:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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lourdoss In reply to Poetrymann [2011-12-12 06:55:48 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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trixieg [2011-12-06 06:18:54 +0000 UTC]

Lovely poem, very sensual and beautiful. The picture is just gorgeous with it too. One thing caught my eye — I think the word you're aiming for is flouts in "skin so fair it flauts a summer day." I may be wrong, but thought I'd mention it just the same. Also, I love the criss-cross of senses in your descriptions: the taste of skin and the lilt/sound of hips, and savoring the scent as if it were so delicious you could nearly taste it.... Just lovely imagery! Well done!

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Poetrymann In reply to trixieg [2011-12-06 06:46:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I miss a lot of typos lately...

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trixieg In reply to Poetrymann [2011-12-10 07:05:33 +0000 UTC]

np! lovely poem!!

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SapphiraTheMongoose [2011-12-06 05:16:36 +0000 UTC]

STOP RIGHT THERE CRIMINAL SCUM.

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Poetrymann In reply to SapphiraTheMongoose [2011-12-06 05:57:30 +0000 UTC]

Excuse me? The image was used with permission. And the poem is mine.

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SapphiraTheMongoose In reply to Poetrymann [2011-12-06 06:16:45 +0000 UTC]

xD. It's a reference to a very popular game called Oblivion, it's probably the most often heard line in the game rofl.

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Poetrymann In reply to SapphiraTheMongoose [2011-12-06 06:23:53 +0000 UTC]

*Laughs* Got it....

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SylvanSmith [2011-12-06 05:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Well written.

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Poetrymann In reply to SylvanSmith [2011-12-10 23:18:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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DontAskWontTell [2011-12-06 04:55:30 +0000 UTC]

Hey; i have this belly dancing outfit!!!! :-D

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ThatBaldWordNerd [2011-12-06 03:21:26 +0000 UTC]

WHEW! That's pretty good. Loving the pure, raw sensuality of it.

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Poetrymann In reply to ThatBaldWordNerd [2011-12-10 23:17:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. I appreciate it!

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