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Description His dimpled cheeks,
carved like a candle's wick,
speak of decades;
and somewhere in the hallway
I can feel my grandfather's ghost
slip off the canvas.
You look like him
she says -
that Roman nose
off fighting wars
in places we can't pronounce
and your clipped jawline
announcing places
like long lost family.
I bet you wear a jacket like him,
shoulders crisp
as the new world
and focused like a poet
on the future.
I'll bet you even smell
like him -
leather warm and humid,

and the apple tint
of music
left on your sleeves.
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Comments: 161

Poetrymann In reply to ??? [2011-09-26 22:59:17 +0000 UTC]

I am glad it did that. It is strange how just a phrase or scent or color can cause memories...and wonderful.

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jimfleming [2011-09-16 14:41:43 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfully lean and precise...As always, your work is a pleasure!
Congratulations and salutations Brendan

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Poetrymann In reply to jimfleming [2011-09-26 22:57:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate it!

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jimfleming In reply to Poetrymann [2011-09-26 23:28:56 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure my friend

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Plaugh [2011-09-10 01:22:41 +0000 UTC]

So many little clues and wonderful images. It is almost like a pointillist painting. Very nice work.

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Poetrymann In reply to Plaugh [2011-09-21 13:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow - that is very nice of you to say!

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Plaugh In reply to Poetrymann [2011-09-21 14:25:49 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome.

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IsabellaMichel [2011-09-05 07:55:42 +0000 UTC]

The Roman jaw-line. Ooh lah lah.

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Poetrymann In reply to IsabellaMichel [2011-09-17 14:45:31 +0000 UTC]

*Grins* What is it about a Roman jaw?

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IsabellaMichel In reply to Poetrymann [2011-09-19 23:45:27 +0000 UTC]

Something beyond words, sir.

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tiajones [2011-09-01 20:39:13 +0000 UTC]

i like this poem.
i like all of your work.
but i especially like this one.
and the way you used scents at the end.

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Poetrymann In reply to tiajones [2011-09-07 14:00:07 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks - I greatly appreciate it!

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RestlessSands [2011-09-01 01:22:22 +0000 UTC]

yes! a DD for you!
and it's the strangest thing... but i seriously crave your writings sometimes
lovely lovely work

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Poetrymann In reply to RestlessSands [2011-09-07 13:58:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so very much - that is really nice of you!

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PridesCrossing [2011-08-29 22:47:35 +0000 UTC]

A very well deserved DD!! Beautiful!

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Poetrymann In reply to PridesCrossing [2011-09-07 13:55:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I was stunned!

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PridesCrossing In reply to Poetrymann [2011-09-07 23:54:31 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome Brendan!!

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archelyxs [2011-08-27 01:02:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this is most lovely
Congrats on your DD

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Poetrymann In reply to archelyxs [2011-09-02 01:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks - I appreciate it very much.

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After-Eden [2011-08-26 03:59:17 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations!!!!!!!!!! It's about time you got a deviant award for your work!

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Poetrymann In reply to After-Eden [2011-09-02 01:43:08 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks. I did get two others awhile ago. I was very honored by this.

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brunette-from-oz [2011-08-25 02:47:24 +0000 UTC]

Pictures in words. Just so comforting to read your work!

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Poetrymann In reply to brunette-from-oz [2011-08-31 01:42:16 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks - that is very nice of you to say!

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AlecBell [2011-08-24 09:36:05 +0000 UTC]

As subtle and enchanting as ever. It would be very difficult to find one of your poems not worthy of a DD.

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Poetrymann In reply to AlecBell [2011-08-31 01:23:19 +0000 UTC]

You are very kind...and your words always mean a lot. Thanks very much.

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AlecBell In reply to Poetrymann [2011-08-31 11:00:42 +0000 UTC]

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dreamarian [2011-08-24 08:13:57 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD, you deserve it!

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Poetrymann In reply to dreamarian [2011-08-31 01:22:53 +0000 UTC]

That is very nice of you - thanks!

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ReygarFaust [2011-08-23 14:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work! I love U!

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Poetrymann In reply to ReygarFaust [2011-08-31 01:19:01 +0000 UTC]

That is very nice of you - thanks!

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Poelee [2011-08-22 21:46:08 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful. I really can't thing of anything to say but that you truly deserved that DD!

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Poetrymann In reply to Poelee [2011-08-31 01:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks - I appreciate it!

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DameOdessa [2011-08-21 08:57:37 +0000 UTC]

Congrats for your DD on this fantastic poem, dear

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Poetrymann In reply to DameOdessa [2011-08-22 14:46:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate it. I was very surprised!

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RainySkyz [2011-08-21 03:57:15 +0000 UTC]

You deserve many DDs. As I've said before, you're a very gifted writer. You have a magical command of words, of spinning silk around sunbeams and polishing the sparkle of every star, in ways I so covet but could never dare to dream. You're one of the -very- best around here, 'tis true.

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Poetrymann In reply to RainySkyz [2011-08-22 14:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate it. I was very surprised!

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Czarine [2011-08-20 07:31:25 +0000 UTC]

I like the subject you have chosen. The woman's description makes me feel like the whole poem is a clip of a conversation.

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Poetrymann In reply to Czarine [2011-08-22 14:45:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate it. I was very surprised!

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Ellyevans679 [2011-08-20 06:08:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm so happy for you Brendan. Your work brings joy to so many of us. Congrats on your DD you deserve it

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Poetrymann In reply to Ellyevans679 [2011-08-22 14:45:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate it. I was very surprised!

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Ellyevans679 In reply to Poetrymann [2011-08-26 08:14:54 +0000 UTC]

Something I know you will appreciate Brendan. It makes me cry [link]
Elle

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TheBrassGlass [2011-08-20 04:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful, wonderfully executed.

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Poetrymann In reply to TheBrassGlass [2011-08-22 14:45:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate it. I was very surprised!

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moon-sorceress [2011-08-20 04:21:32 +0000 UTC]

CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!! You deserve it!

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Poetrymann In reply to moon-sorceress [2011-08-22 14:45:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate it. I was very surprised!

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achromaticbeliefs [2011-08-20 03:53:01 +0000 UTC]

the flow is just fantastic, as are the similes that guide the reader along

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Poetrymann In reply to achromaticbeliefs [2011-08-22 14:45:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate it. I was very surprised!

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TheDarkvampire85 [2011-08-20 01:42:14 +0000 UTC]

how did u make this

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Poetrymann In reply to TheDarkvampire85 [2011-08-22 14:45:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate it. I was very surprised!

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TheDarkvampire85 In reply to Poetrymann [2011-08-22 17:54:14 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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