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Poetrymann — The Lady of Astolat

Published: 2011-12-20 13:18:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 3508; Favourites: 147; Downloads: 27
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Description A dangling weave of tangled threads
Lies mangled on the loom.
The scent of broom and bitter root
Still permeates the gloom.

A shadowed light was all her world,
Wherein the mirror lies -
The misted lake of Avalon,
A dulcimer of sighs.

And she would gaze on Camelot
Within the mirror's glass
A peerless portal to that world,
Its future and its past.

The halcyon days of Arthur's court
In songs of troubadours,
The knights and code of chivalry -
A kingdom she adored.

Weave and spin; spin and weave
Watch the shuttle fly
The days weave out; the days weave in
And I will break the sky.

She felt the waning years' restraint,
The gloom of heart entombed
A shadow play of tragedy
The censed reek of doom.

"Alas, I am a Queen of shades
To bear the cruelest taunt -
To never gaze at Camelot,
Just its reflected haunt."

When on that road to Camelot
She glimpsed a knight so fair,
She turned from mirror to gaze out
And ached to flee her lair.

The shuttle broke within her hand;
The tapestry unfurled;
The mirror shattered in its frame -
The destruction of her world.

Weave and spin; spin and weave
Watch the shadows fly
The days weave out; the days weave in
And I will break the sky.

She felt the curse - destruction's plague,
Its rampant rage malformed
Did send her fleeing from her rooms
To seek refuge in the storm.

And when at last a boat she spied,
She felt the final hour -
A drifting grave, a river bed
A reeded, wind-spent bower.

She drifted down to Camelot,
A blessing on her breath,
That he who never knew her life
Should gaze upon her death.

That goodly knight with honeyed words
Beheld the lady's face
"For beauty naught in any life
Could ere eclipse her grace."

Weave and spin; spin and weave
Watch the shuttle fly
The days weave out; the days weave in
And I will break the sky.
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Comments: 90

Poetrymann In reply to ??? [2012-05-25 00:04:58 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks. I am glad you like it!

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randomizator [2012-04-21 15:19:39 +0000 UTC]

beautiful stuff...

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Poetrymann In reply to randomizator [2012-04-24 15:03:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate that!

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GirlUndefined [2012-04-02 13:31:24 +0000 UTC]

This poem reminds me of The Lady of Shallot - I love this piece, beautiful imagery

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Poetrymann In reply to GirlUndefined [2012-04-05 00:05:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate it!

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roamingtigress [2012-03-07 07:16:25 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work here. I love the flow of the writing!

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Poetrymann In reply to roamingtigress [2012-03-07 23:29:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate it.

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roamingtigress In reply to Poetrymann [2012-03-07 23:40:03 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome!

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RequiemsandReveries [2012-03-04 02:23:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh holy hell this is amazing and fantastic. You are so very talented. Can I ask a favor? Would you record this as spoken word and link it to me? I would LOVE to hear you read it (puppy eyes). Anyways, it's super fantabulous and I love it.

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Poetrymann In reply to RequiemsandReveries [2012-03-07 23:26:32 +0000 UTC]

*Laughs* Thanks! Ummmm..how would I do that?

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EmpressEliana [2012-02-17 02:35:31 +0000 UTC]

Fabulous. A gorgeous piece of Artwork!

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Poetrymann In reply to EmpressEliana [2012-02-29 23:36:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate it!

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Namminah [2012-01-12 16:00:27 +0000 UTC]

I love your poetry. This piece is beautiful and full if imagery. I always look forward to reading your work! You're such an inspiration!

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Poetrymann In reply to Namminah [2012-01-18 20:58:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much.

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Namminah In reply to Poetrymann [2012-03-17 18:14:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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GrannyJae [2012-01-12 05:13:34 +0000 UTC]

I've run out of worthy adjectives, Brendan...

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Poetrymann In reply to GrannyJae [2012-01-18 20:57:54 +0000 UTC]

You are far too kind - many thanks.

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bk-Blayze [2012-01-05 12:05:06 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful in both it's archaic metering and imagery, kudos

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Poetrymann In reply to bk-Blayze [2012-01-07 23:04:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I am very glad you like it!

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Parsat [2012-01-04 21:50:13 +0000 UTC]

The ballad meter is impeccable, and the piece is beautiful without even a wrinkle. Is the piece ekphrastic?

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Poetrymann In reply to Parsat [2012-01-07 23:04:06 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks, Yes and no. I have wanted to write about her for years...and the art work was the catalyst.

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PaperDreamerArt [2012-01-04 00:13:33 +0000 UTC]



Loved it!

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Poetrymann In reply to PaperDreamerArt [2012-01-07 23:02:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I had wanted to write a poem about her for years!

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PaperDreamerArt In reply to Poetrymann [2012-01-09 22:35:44 +0000 UTC]

Welcome...and you finally did!

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SylvanSmith [2012-01-03 22:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Well crafted.

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Poetrymann In reply to SylvanSmith [2012-01-07 23:02:14 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks!

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LeeAnneKortus [2011-12-29 18:11:54 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, Brendan! You did the story and the lovely image wonderful tribute!!!

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Poetrymann In reply to LeeAnneKortus [2011-12-31 15:59:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much and Happy New Year!

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ParadiseLost9 [2011-12-29 01:20:25 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of another poem I read for a competition... Wonderful work!

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Poetrymann In reply to ParadiseLost9 [2011-12-30 21:44:45 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks! That is very appreciated!

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adelechapline [2011-12-28 21:55:58 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! Great take on something classic

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Poetrymann In reply to adelechapline [2011-12-30 21:44:39 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks! That is very appreciated!

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finishyourtea [2011-12-26 22:16:19 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work as always!

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Poetrymann In reply to finishyourtea [2012-01-03 17:39:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I am glad you like it.

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DubuGomdori [2011-12-24 07:57:32 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfully laid out and colored. Good job!

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Poetrymann In reply to DubuGomdori [2011-12-31 15:58:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much and Happy New Year!

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moon-sorceress [2011-12-23 01:01:22 +0000 UTC]

One of my favourite poems of all time, you did it much justice!!!!

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Poetrymann In reply to moon-sorceress [2011-12-31 15:58:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much and Happy New Year!

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KaysThoughts [2011-12-22 05:08:50 +0000 UTC]

wonderful written

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Poetrymann In reply to KaysThoughts [2011-12-31 15:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much and Happy New Year!

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KaysThoughts In reply to Poetrymann [2012-01-01 16:51:32 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome and a Happy New Year too

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mauricegmk [2011-12-22 04:08:44 +0000 UTC]

I like it alot

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Poetrymann In reply to mauricegmk [2011-12-31 15:57:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much and Happy New Year!

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mauricegmk In reply to Poetrymann [2012-01-23 05:20:36 +0000 UTC]

when you get time can you read my story (anyone)

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BloodMoonEquinox [2011-12-21 18:42:15 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic!

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Poetrymann In reply to BloodMoonEquinox [2011-12-31 03:00:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate it!

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i-am-a-bridgewalker [2011-12-21 08:27:14 +0000 UTC]

also featured you here! [link]

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Poetrymann In reply to i-am-a-bridgewalker [2012-01-02 16:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

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i-am-a-bridgewalker [2011-12-21 03:39:34 +0000 UTC]

I actually read through this whole thing without knowing it was yours (I have far too many tabs open at the moment), the whole time wondering who on deviantart could possibly snare the lilting mythic with this much pointed grace.

now, of course, it's all too obvious.

fantastic work. I was deliciously lost in every line.

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Poetrymann In reply to i-am-a-bridgewalker [2012-01-02 16:51:47 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks. This poem means a lot to me.

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