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Pony-Berserker β The Royal Flu (Page 8)
#fim #finale #flu #hug #mlp #ponies #princessluna #princesscelestia #canterlot
Published: 2015-07-21 23:04:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 54093; Favourites: 841; Downloads: 294
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Page 8 - You are hereStory: Lionel23
Art: Pony-Berserker
Script editors: Pony-Berserker, VoidChicken
So, here is the final page of this mini series that started over a year ago when I uploaded a cover... I personally had a very different ending in mind, more in my style - a twisted one, but the writer insisted on this one that he had on mind. Oh, well, what can I do about that. What doesn't work for me in this one is how Luna is treated here like an 8-y.o. girl rather than an over-1000-year old alicorn she is (asking her not to grow up too fast seems kinda silly). Eh, whatever
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i always find this comic so uplifting.
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Well she forgot how to do a lot of things after being in the Moon for a millennia.
Gesundheit!
Oh, hey, a comic series you actually finished.
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I just learned that word, two hours ago... And now I see it everywhere!
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Ozzie of German descent, got to hear that word as far back as I can remember and that's nearly to the first moon landing.
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Me: Uhm Celestia I don't think equestria can survive without you for one more day.
Celestia: it's just one more day what could possibly go wrong?
One day later
Me: Celestia have you been outside lately?
Celestial: No why?
Me: welllll Canterlot is on fire, the changlings have defeated the mane six and has concurred ponyville, Tirek has escaped AGAIN, Discord had been thrown in jail for something he didn't do, There are reports of Sirens turning ponies against eachother, The Wonderbolts have vanished, the timber wolves have left the everfree and are hunting ponies, Cadence has been turned evil and is imprisoning everypony that opposes her, Sights of King Sombra have been reported but no luck finding him. Should I go on Or should I told you so.
Celestia: -very much stunned and lost for words-
A lot can happen in one day Lol XD
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Can i make this a comic XD
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Oh sorry I haven't been on for a while so I don't know if your comment was recent but I would love to see this turned into a comic.
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XD oke! Yey and the comment was recent
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Good, that means we finally get a much needed Celestia focused episode.
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I like your art. It's like you are Andy Price yourself.
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I still can't believe Celstia is over 1000 fucking years old and she hasn't changed a bit, same with Luna(except for her hair but I'm talking about... Um... Um UH WHY CANT I EVER GET THE WORD)
You guys know what I'm trying to talk about though?
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Good genes and really powerful alicorn magic will do that. Β
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their... age? youth-looking?
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Just random, she does look really young
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exactly!
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i know right
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hehe, yus
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Gesundheit is also a word commonly used in American English -Β www.oxfordlearnersdictionariesβ¦
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I know I know......
but since I live in Germany its just funny
XD
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As i said at page 3, i would leave my final review when i reached the final page.
I completely agree with you, about Luna shouldn't be treated like an 8 yearly brat, she should be treated like a 1008 year old Alicorn.Β
The whole grow up stuff was completely uncalled for.
as for Luna getting sick, well it was kinda logic and half expected.Β
I've read all your descriptions along the way, and i know it was the script writer who was in control, even though you sometimes threw in something you wanted to do, which was hilarious.Β
For me atleast, it seems like you had the funniest and craziest ideas,Β I would love to see how you would had ended it,
So when you get some spare time and paper, you should try and draw the last page as you wanted it, as an alternative ending
I would enjoy seeing that "twist" you were talking about 
All in all,
We! are Pleased with this comic of books, We had much Joy!!
As Luna would had said it
I liked the many references and the over all style and story, which is 90% similar to the original series, you did a bang good job. Β
So as i said at page 3, this is a good sequel to issue 10# of the micro series.Β
Not as good, but close enough
Btw, I'm a big fan of Luna, and I've been chasing down everything worthwhile related to her, i'm glad i found this, and you for that matter, because it seems like you got alot of Luna stuff, which i will be checking out next
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Hey. I'm glad you like this little comic.
I'm not sure if I like the idea of making an alternative ending. First of all it'd surely upset the writer who is probably already upset with me. And another thing is that I have other comics I want to do...
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Glad you read my comment
About the alternative ending, just one day where you have a "writers block" or something, and cant seem where you wanna go next, you could go back to this, Β and create the final page you wanted, you could also publish 1 panel at a time. that way the script writer will never notice hehe......unless he reads this of course.......
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I actually had to 'redo' last two pages to convey my version of ending
But yeah, I might put this idea somewhere deep in the freezer
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Glad to hear, when one day you are out of stock og ideas, you go look in the Freezer, and maybe find this, lets hope its not Frozen completely solid, so that you cant get it out of there
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Wait, it takes 1-4 days before symptoms of a flu to show up after infection and the person acts a carrier the entire time. Does that mean Luna could have spread her infection to the rest of the Main 6?
Oh wow, it would be funny if Celestia would have to sub in for the Main 6 when the latest catastrophe attacks Ponyville or Equestria.
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no i guess its different with alicorns cause there inmmortalΒ * p.s im bad at spelling so excuse it *
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"Gesundheit"... another German word found it's way into the american language? ^^
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