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Postmorteum β€” Celustial
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Description Seeing you from afar, from the safety of my home planet,
I felt this urge, this need,
to explore you.

I would steal nights, just to see you.
To watch you shimmer, watch you move,
watch you sparkle.

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I wasn't patient, I should have waited,
until I was better educated,
better experienced.

But I took off - shuttled and launched,
blasting off and away,
just to say hi.

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I stared into your black holes - I got lost in your galaxies,
I felt sucked in,
and captured.

Awe-inspired,
and in love,
with you.

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I learned, you were not capable of love, of warmth,
other than bursts,
of dying stars.

You were colder than I expected,
and so I finally,
was.
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Comments: 20

ClassyNerd16 [2017-08-28 19:07:09 +0000 UTC]

This is very beautifully written.

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Postmorteum In reply to ClassyNerd16 [2017-08-28 22:17:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly.

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ClassyNerd16 In reply to Postmorteum [2017-08-30 19:08:42 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome. Β 

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ClaireAdele [2014-08-27 19:47:32 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful and bitter-sweet. I love the way you end things.

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Postmorteum In reply to ClaireAdele [2014-09-03 04:36:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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NeoKeth [2014-08-25 17:36:37 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING!

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Postmorteum In reply to NeoKeth [2014-09-03 04:35:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Digital-Ragnarok [2014-08-24 16:59:03 +0000 UTC]

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Postmorteum In reply to Digital-Ragnarok [2014-09-03 04:34:11 +0000 UTC]

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chinoise56 [2014-08-23 05:46:08 +0000 UTC]

You have an interesting way of phrasing and analogy which I find very intriguing.
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Postmorteum In reply to chinoise56 [2014-08-23 20:00:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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chinoise56 In reply to Postmorteum [2014-08-23 20:23:09 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome!Β  The pleasure is mine on reading your lovely works.

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GoldenNocturna [2014-08-22 19:57:52 +0000 UTC]

Nice analogy. I never would've thought to compare a bad relationship to space travel. The only thing I would suggest is to reduce the comma usage. Other than that, great job.

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Postmorteum In reply to GoldenNocturna [2014-08-23 20:00:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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GoldenNocturna In reply to Postmorteum [2014-08-24 13:10:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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ssabbath [2014-08-21 15:28:03 +0000 UTC]

"Cute words" but then... cold words!

DonΒ΄t know why, this reminds me a song "Porcupine Tree - Blackest Eyes", good music, you should listen to it!

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Carmalain7 In reply to ssabbath [2014-08-21 18:51:19 +0000 UTC]

^I agree with this man in that you should listen to Porcupine Tree.

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ssabbath In reply to Carmalain7 [2014-09-01 23:18:36 +0000 UTC]

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WonderfulTyrant [2014-08-21 05:01:33 +0000 UTC]

This is phenomenal.

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Postmorteum In reply to WonderfulTyrant [2014-08-21 11:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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