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Published: 2003-09-29 20:57:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 68; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description They sit and fade,
like the dull khaki cage enclosing them.

But the rustling and the scratching,
no sound dare break the wretched silence.

A youth dies in it's locus,
leaving only a grey, soulless shell.

The tone screaches,
commanding the robots to move.

They crawl on,
all with the same dreary, even pace.

As the gloom dissipates,
that freedom bell blairs out, surging the shells with life.

Though repeatitive,
more glorious than ever...
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Comments: 4

PookieDot [2003-09-30 01:39:42 +0000 UTC]

That was really good Pat, I could just picture everyone walking around all grey..I like it a lot

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Pr0udCha0s In reply to PookieDot [2003-09-30 04:22:38 +0000 UTC]

Thnx Sara, means a lot.

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phookabooka [2003-09-29 21:10:50 +0000 UTC]

THAT'S why i was M.I.A. during my senior year... the evil memories come flooding back when i read this....


cold chill....

good job!

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Pr0udCha0s In reply to phookabooka [2003-09-29 23:50:54 +0000 UTC]

Lol thnx

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