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Gendermorph [2017-03-11 10:27:50 +0000 UTC]
I wasn't sure if this was just going to be torturing a fat woman for the majority, but i was glad when at the end it still retained that ''Bad people get punished'' at the end.
It was walking a fine line between comfortable and just agony for the sake of agony.
That is perhaps my old complaint with it. It didn't have that arousing kind of domination like the story Rina did where it was a turn-on. If anything it was just...weird. I had no idea what this woman's problem was. She was behaving like such a kid (which is ironic that at the end she turns into one) but not even in a ''dominating'' kind of way, just...childish way.
Overall, i still enjoyed it enough to include it as a TG WG that i'll be returning to in the future.
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SomeGuyCalledMattie In reply to Gendermorph [2017-03-12 07:07:46 +0000 UTC]
You know, I see what you mean.
I commissioned this piece and was ultimately happy with the finished product. However, I admit it has problems.
This is tricky. I'm friends with the writer and I truly did like it, but it did get uncomfortable at times and I thought it would turn out with a more arousing dom feel. It fell just shy of that.
That said, I am curious about that other story you mentioned. I don't think I'm familiar with it.
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Trans-Car-Girl [2017-03-09 07:45:27 +0000 UTC]
A very interesting story indeed.
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