Comments: 47
TwistedAlyx [2009-10-20 16:44:58 +0000 UTC]
Nice.
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y0urstalker [2009-08-31 07:08:05 +0000 UTC]
I've memorized all but the last stanza
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y0urstalker [2009-08-31 07:07:39 +0000 UTC]
you have no idea how in love with this poem I am
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y0urstalker [2009-06-01 12:43:04 +0000 UTC]
I am rereading this for the gazillionth time
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TheBloodWriter [2009-05-21 19:26:06 +0000 UTC]
Excellent, final stanza especially, extra-especially the bit about twining.
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prairiedaisy In reply to Panda-Vision [2009-05-22 22:31:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you most kindly - that was actually Shane playing off my words. He has a way of doing that.
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ChibiChi916 [2009-04-23 02:31:24 +0000 UTC]
Breathtaking!
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That-Hippie-Kid [2009-04-22 02:42:52 +0000 UTC]
you guys are fantastic together. well done.
<3
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leyghan [2009-04-22 01:02:52 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful words.
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gliitchlord [2009-04-21 20:25:41 +0000 UTC]
I was wondering when this was going to happen.
Fantastic collaboration.
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PlatoPushpin [2009-04-21 20:18:35 +0000 UTC]
You guys are huge together.
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IAmPhoenixMoth [2009-04-21 18:40:01 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely love the rhythm and the language of this.
You guys worked REALLY well together; your styles flowed so well I actually can't spot who's who.
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anyimacielgray [2009-04-21 17:46:19 +0000 UTC]
you two are fabulous together
<3
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tigerpusen05 [2009-04-21 15:31:05 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic.
It's absolutely gorgeous.
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Katchzen [2009-04-21 15:13:08 +0000 UTC]
Wow. You two write really well together. I can't tell which of you wrote which lines, so seamlessly your voices combined.
"And the world won't wait to spin while I catch my breath."
I love how you've taken such an over-used idea and turned it into something new and interesting. It's my favourite line. ^^
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