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UnorthodoxRavenBeast [2016-07-07 18:18:52 +0000 UTC]
crude I did not know she had wings
Sorry I messed up...
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Princess-Of-Curse [2016-04-18 13:13:04 +0000 UTC]
this was so intersting and similar to some of mine XD but i love it
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doritomadness97 [2016-04-15 03:35:34 +0000 UTC]
Is she your OC? I really need to borrow yours....
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PioneeringAuthor [2016-03-01 02:08:37 +0000 UTC]
I hate to say this, but I only read about half of this.
It is quite fascinating, but I don't think I have time to read it all right now---anyway, I think her design and story is quite creative and I like how fluffy her mane and hooves and tail looks. I think you did a good job putting together her story and species, and I really do appreciate all the time and effort you put into her.
By the way, I think she's up against my Neon Butterfly in the OC tournament. In fact, that is why I came here---I wanted to see what she was like. I must admit... I have no idea who would win this fight---Neon or Azure... I don't know. If Azure is really stronger than Big Mac, then Neon Butterfly would have to be careful, but at the same time Neon Butterfly is pretty fast and versatile, and she can carry around a Naginata easily, so she would be pretty strong too... but I still have no idea who would win this fight.
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pretty-pegasus-wings In reply to PioneeringAuthor [2016-03-01 02:23:10 +0000 UTC]
That's alright, it's a lot of info (and it kind of needs to be updated, a few things have changed). Thank you for the feedback, I put a whole lot of thought into her character as she's the main character in my fan fiction The Traveling Storyteller so having a developed and well thought out character is quiet important. And that's real interesting! I didn't know she got accepted so thanks for letting me know. I went and looked her up and she seems like a real solid character. I agree, it's going to be a close one, they seem like they would be evenly matched to an extent. I can see Azure having an advantage in that she has a strong stance and those dive's won't do all to much to break it, but at the same time, if the battle went into the air, she'd have an advantage over her. We'll just have to see how it goes I guess.
Azure: Good luck Miss Butterfly *goes into fighting stance*! Let's do our best!
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PioneeringAuthor In reply to pretty-pegasus-wings [2016-03-01 02:30:58 +0000 UTC]
Well, Neon Butterfly has been battle training with that naginata since she was a filly... so... she does know how to use it... hmm... Naginata Vs. Rapier... I love fencing but... mmm... not sure if a rapier would withstand the sheer weight of the naginata... but at the same time, Azure is pretty big looking... Neon Butterfly would probably take to the sky... hmmm... man I have no idea who would win, and I am glad you like my Neon butterfly
Also, I just read more of Azure's story---very sad. Then again, it's not as sad as some stories I've made---hey, at least she has both of her parents while my Neon Butterfly lost her mom at a young age... which is what made her start the naginata training; her father wanted her to get out all that depression and move on with her life.
Anyway, this looks like it'll be a close fight! Too bad this isn't a video game, eh?
Neon Butterfly: *bows* Same to you, Honorable Azure. May the best soldier win.
Oh and one last thing, Neon Does look really serious, but she does have a friendly side... but she is pretty fierce in battle, just saying.
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pretty-pegasus-wings In reply to PioneeringAuthor [2016-03-01 12:20:43 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that's the whole reason why I picked her to have a rapier, because I once did fencing in high school and fencing's awesome (I really want to get back to it one day)! It'll defiantly be a close one and I'm excited to see who wins what! Maybe one day, when I become an actual animator, I will have to animate that fight.
Her backstory isn't exactly the happiest, but it's not all too bad. She had friends, a family (well, her father wasn't the best), and made for a pretty good soldier. Here's the thing though, Azure doesn't know if they're going to keep her mother alive. She helped a "criminal" (couldn't really think of a better word) escape, once they squeeze any and all info out of her, they'll most likely dispose of her unless she is considered to be too important to be rid of. At least now she's pretty happy, aside from the Empire chasing her down attacking every village she visits and there's nothing she can do about it.
Maybe they'll become friends after all this, I could write a story about it!
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pretty-pegasus-wings In reply to PioneeringAuthor [2016-03-01 13:38:42 +0000 UTC]
It's so awesome! I had the best fencing coach in high school after our creepy and, as we refereed to him, pedo coach left. He told us the reason he screams after a hit is to trick the ref into thinking it was his point. Then one of us brought up the fact it was cheating and he responded "No, it's manipulating the ref."
Ah, that's too bad. There's sort of are fencing clubs in my area, but I'm a bit out of practice and I don't have the time (or courage because social awkwardness) to go and actually fence with those people .
Don't worry, her story doesn't end there, she's has and will meet all kinds of strange and friendly creatures and go on the craziest adventures. The question is, how will it all end?
We'll just have to see, speaking of which, I should write a journal following Azure's journal through the tournament, that is, if she makes it past the first round.
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pretty-pegasus-wings In reply to PioneeringAuthor [2016-03-01 14:03:59 +0000 UTC]
Was is a mustache you can twirl, like one of those curly ones?
Oh how cute! Azure sort of has a designated special somepony, that being Silver Lance, but she has yet to notice that he likes her despite almost the entire Empire knowing he has a massive crush on her. She's constantly friend zoning him in the worst way "You're like the big brother I never had!" I always like to joke he's the one senpai who's trying to get noticed.
I know, I feel the same way! I want to vote for my baby, but I also want Neon Butterfly to win! Why must life torture me so?!
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pretty-pegasus-wings In reply to PioneeringAuthor [2016-03-01 14:13:55 +0000 UTC]
Well, it's not like she's rejecting him, she's just completely clueless to the fact that he likes her. Since she was born with no horn, she wouldn't ever think she'd ever have suitors, let alone one, so she's kind of sees his advances as him being friendly or cute.
I know, it'd be torturous if we had to vote!
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PioneeringAuthor In reply to pretty-pegasus-wings [2016-03-01 14:17:26 +0000 UTC]
Neon Butterfly is kinda like that, in the sense that she doesn't think she's pretty so she doubts she would have any suiters. Also, she has this thing where she doesn't want anypony that is weaker than her, so when she DOES have a suiter she fights him in a match and beats him... and then he leaves dejected. Yeah, she doubts anypony is going to marry her... until that one comes along...
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PepperScratch [2016-02-14 23:17:58 +0000 UTC]
I didn't know that a 0 hours of different species of pony I figured that she looks like more like a pony I guess. She is so cute.
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pretty-pegasus-wings In reply to PepperScratch [2016-02-14 23:41:23 +0000 UTC]
Many people say that, I didn't think catazonons would look all too different from ponies aside from their manes, tails, and their size in comparison to the average pony based on the descriptions I found.
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Pjj0 [2016-01-05 03:45:19 +0000 UTC]
Looks good, do you mind if I give some feedback?
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pretty-pegasus-wings In reply to Pjj0 [2016-01-05 12:46:02 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I'd love to hear what you have to say (just so you know, her design has changed a bit since this with her mane being a bit more poofy and fuller looking as well as a bit more lion like)!
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Pjj0 In reply to pretty-pegasus-wings [2016-01-06 01:05:57 +0000 UTC]
Well I was thinking of maybe making the hooves into more of a gradient rather than the scalloped shape, also the snout looks a bit awkward,
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pretty-pegasus-wings In reply to Pjj0 [2016-01-06 01:29:11 +0000 UTC]
I'm not all to great with gradients (and I'm assuming you mean the fluff near the hooves, sorry, I don't really understand what you mean by 'scalloped shaped'), but I'm always willing to try anything; and I do agree, the snout does look awkward and I have worked on it as I've drawn her more, now it looks more similar to that of Celestia's. Thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it!
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Pjj0 In reply to pretty-pegasus-wings [2016-01-06 03:28:31 +0000 UTC]
No problem! Also I'm sorry this is taking so long, my files army loading very well and I'm studying for midterms, I'll have done as soon as I can.
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Scarlett-The-Eevee [2015-10-12 20:43:28 +0000 UTC]
She's cute! (would you like the new design to be on the story :3)
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