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Published: 2012-04-25 05:29:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 2343; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 32
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Description Captain Snow (First Name "Frances") is another OC I created to play a part in Star Bolt My OC’s Story.

Frances Snow’s Profile
Name: Frances Snow III
Aliases: Captain Snow
Species: Earth Pony
Age: 19
Cutie Mark: Badge of confidence.
Talent: Being confident enough in himself to survive almost any predicament.
Birthplace: Canterlot
Parents: Nancy Snow IV (Earth Pony, Mother) Frances Snow Jr. (Earth Pony, Father)
Siblings: None
Personality: Self Centered, Selfish, Overconfident, Brave, and Strong Willed
Weapon of choice: Fencing Sward

Frances Snow The 3rd was born in a high-class area of Canterlot. While he grew up his family’s nobility was always telling him that he was better than everypony else despite the fact that he could never be seen as important as his father, the keeper of the family fortune. When he discovered that he is a decedent of a grate earth pony leader, from before Celestia’s rule, he developed a large amount of confidence in himself earning his cutie mark (an assurance medal) in confidence itself. However when most would take this to heart as an encouraging future, He took it to heart that he was more important than everypony else.

He eventually joined the Royal Guard in hopes that he would one day command them; his arrogant actions and attempts to dodge or disobey orders kept him at a low rank until he was able to prove himself in the Griffon Civil War that he was a determined soldier, from then on he joined the ranks as an officer. When Nightmare Moon formed a Coup-De-Tat against her sister, he joined the Nightmare Legion under Commander Bolt (AKA Star Bolt). Because of his attitude he and Commander Bolt didn’t get along, despite their prior service together, in fact if not for his ability to use his family’s fencing sword and a shield that he made himself, Star Bolt would have already discharged him, for insubordination. It’s because of these skills alone that he remains the officer in command of Nightmare Moons swords ponies. As time went by his arrogates finally went down to a point where trust between him and commander bolt could be formed however he never continues to see himself as a higher class than everypony else and is determined to prove this to his family and the world.


Tears of a Fallen Star
Chapter 1: fav.me/d4w5ebv The Colt Wakes and Names Himself
Chapter 2: fav.me/d4w6vdr The Exam
Chapter 3: fav.me/d4we7si Commander Bolt’s Decision
Chapter 4: fav.me/d4x17cr The Friendly Foe and the Eclipsed Nightmare
Chapter 5: fav.me/d4xp4r8 Two Orphans, Celestia, And New Recruits
Chapter 6: fav.me/d4ynjjv Celestia's Stand, and Forgotten Foes
Chapter 7: fav.me/d4znl6f Peace in Death, Love in War, And Good in Evil
Chapter 8: fav.me/d50kgrs Confrontations between Nations
Chapter 9: fav.me/d51xoqq The Bolt That Cleared the Mist
Chapter 10: fav.me/d53tfvo The Fatal Funnel
Chapter 11: fav.me/d54h6dd Wounded Spiritually, Physically, and Emotionally
Chapter 12: fav.me/d55rfxx A Murder In Cloudsdale’s Shadow
Chapter 13: fav.me/d56edgz Past Wounds in Present Skies
Chapter 14: fav.me/d576517 Who I Am
Chapter 15: fav.me/d594aq2 My Home Front
Chapter 16: fav.me/d5apb0a The Enotions of War
Chapter 17: fav.me/d5bhdyt True Pain
Chapter 18: fav.me/d5di7hf Letter From a Mare in Love
Chapter 19: fav.me/d5e5mud A Meeting to End the War
Chapter 20: fav.me/d5eis0g By the Light of the Stars
Chapter 21: fav.me/d5eyn90 The Fallen Star
Chapter 22: fav.me/d5fhdeq A New Dawn

Other Characters in Tears of a Fallen Star
fav.me/d4ycees (Commander) Star Bolt
fav.me/d4xhjhe (Captain) Gem Stone
fav.me/d4xhz2s (Commander) Chrome Mist
fav.me/d4y65lz (Lieutenant) Ardent Viscous
fav.me/d4y4xp6 (Captain) Callous Drib
fav.me/d54vlyb (Commander) Alfarinn Orem
fav.me/d54n8qv (General) Roza Neghvelskie
fav.me/d54n8pg (Chief) Jumb Rafi

image by: pony creator fav.me/d47efz4
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Comments: 9

ThatFerretOverThere [2012-08-18 07:32:01 +0000 UTC]

Be safe Frances. I wonder what happened to his siblings.

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grimreeper2121 [2012-07-09 03:16:16 +0000 UTC]

i like this oc card like all of them and just letting you know a fencing sword would be more of a foil or epee this is more like a sabre just fyi lol i fence so i just thought id throw that out there

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Priceless911 In reply to grimreeper2121 [2012-07-09 03:21:51 +0000 UTC]

ok well i tried to give him somthing that usualy upper class ponies would have as a family airloom so all id have to do is change a few words. in the story all i refer to it as is a sword so its not that big a change

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grimreeper2121 In reply to Priceless911 [2012-07-09 03:25:56 +0000 UTC]

yeah i wasnt trying to put u down or anything its just something i noticed being a fencer myself its fine calling it a fencing sword there is a type of fencing that involves a sabre its just not commonly used anymore

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Priceless911 In reply to grimreeper2121 [2012-07-09 03:31:31 +0000 UTC]

well this is an airlome passed down from his ancestoers so i guess it could be that type of fencing sword.

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grimreeper2121 In reply to Priceless911 [2012-07-09 03:36:36 +0000 UTC]

i guess so lol i admit defeat as to being wrong lol!

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Priceless911 In reply to grimreeper2121 [2012-07-09 03:37:49 +0000 UTC]

i dont know anything about fencing so we can call this one a draw. lol

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grimreeper2121 In reply to Priceless911 [2012-07-09 03:38:44 +0000 UTC]

lol agreed

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RocketJumpSoldie337 [2012-04-25 06:01:30 +0000 UTC]

Awesome ^^

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