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PriestNeftis — Yugioh Doujinshi: Beyond the Surface -UPDATED-

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UPDATED JANUARY 16TH 2024, I wanted to fix some details in the art now that it's been so many years hehe I think it looks a bit better now!


Yep, the cover of the doujinshi I'm drawing right now ^^

In my last deviation you could have a brief spoiler about it c:

First Page:


I'm currently running a poll to know how would you want me to submit this doujin, vote if you want~ yamineftis.deviantart.com/jour… So the submit pages once I finish them option has won xD


This cover kiiinda shows what the doujinshi will be about, but I guess in a different way you may be thinking now xD you will see, and even though it shows the characters as children, they won't be at the doujin.

Now, this is a NeftisxAtem doujin but focused on Atem, so you're warned ouo it will have Ocs and MY headcanons about the characters, specially Atem. If you don't agree with them you can tell me but I won't change the story only because you don't like the way I see the characters and start complaining unpolitely :I, that's why I leave this warning before you start. Suggestions are always welcome though ^^

Anyway, about the drawing, I like how it came out Atem and his friends ad children playing, Atem as the pharaoh *yep, that's Akhenamkhanen's robe xD he looks so cute with it* and the others as his court, Neftis is the scribe, Mana the magician and Amkhi the leader of the kuriboh guards lol Seto is not really amused *he wants to be the leader >8C ...ok no xDDD* and Mahad can't help but smile. I have plenty of work to finish aside from the doujinshi so it may take me days to upload new pages.


Summary:
Pharaoh Akhenamkhanen has passed away and Atem is about to be crowned, but things are not going as planned as the prince starts his journey to finally understand who he is and will be as the new pharaoh.

This doujinshi takes place in the historical version of Yugioh, which means that Atem is only a 19 year old young man that still needs to learn a lot. In MY headcanon, the fact that he became a pharaoh at such a young age took him by surprise and made him grow up too fast to realize some things about himself, that's why he learned a LOT with Yugi and his friends, and why he was a really mature young pharaoh for his age at the Shadow RPG.
Atem: 19 years old
Neftis: 19 years old - more info: yamineftis.deviantart.com/art/… yamineftis.deviantart.com/art/…
Amkhi: 17 years old - more info: chibichibimana.deviantart.com/…
Mana: 16 years old
Seto: 22 years old
Mahad: 25 years old

Some facts I changed/facts you need to know or remember:
-Their ages are never specified in the canon so don't try to complain ouo it is how I see them~
-Atem is taller in my story, since I made them older in my story I just hc think he grew up a bit by then hehe
-Mahad, Mana, Amkhi and Neftis are Atem's childhood friends *you know Mahad is 6 or 7 years older than Atem at the most*
-Seto is their childhood friend too but he joined them years later: after the incident at his villa with the bandits and the blue eyes, he arrived the palace as an orphan survivor from the "village destroyed by bandits" and Akunadin took him as his pupile *knowing he was his son but without telling him of course*
-Amkhi is Nubian, not Egyptian
-Neftis and Atem are already in a relationship here, don't expect romance though 8D (I'm such a bad person fufufu)
-I didn't plan this doujinshi to be historial accurate, so don't try to bring here real stuff about Egypt and pharaohs, I know them myself, I LOVE Egyptian culture BUT this doujinshi is about Yugioh, the anime/manga that threw away all the historical accuracy it could, so I simply used and twisted some real facts from the Egyptians to fit in this story, capisci?

Yugioh, Atem, Mahad, Seto and Mana © Kazuki Takahashi
Art & Neftis © PriestNeftis
Amkhi © chibichibimana

Colouring Time: about 7 hours
Tools:
Autodesk Sketchbook Pro
Easy Paint Tool SAI
Photoshop CS4

Special thanks to and who helped me with the tittle

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Comments: 136

Cyberbee15 [2023-10-15 02:58:16 +0000 UTC]

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PriestNeftis In reply to Cyberbee15 [2023-11-26 19:13:18 +0000 UTC]

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Cyberbee15 In reply to PriestNeftis [2023-11-26 20:38:46 +0000 UTC]

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kelekiahshadya [2022-01-21 22:21:45 +0000 UTC]

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PriestNeftis In reply to kelekiahshadya [2022-01-25 03:50:32 +0000 UTC]

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kelekiahshadya In reply to PriestNeftis [2022-01-25 21:47:52 +0000 UTC]

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LeoFan85 [2021-12-11 01:31:55 +0000 UTC]

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PriestNeftis In reply to LeoFan85 [2021-12-14 03:47:50 +0000 UTC]

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LeoFan85 In reply to PriestNeftis [2021-12-14 23:37:34 +0000 UTC]

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jilly1981 [2020-06-18 02:57:21 +0000 UTC]

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ATxXx [2016-11-14 01:31:37 +0000 UTC]

I like this coverd and this doujinshi looks interesting +_+ makes me want to read it >_<

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MarieJaneWorks [2016-01-16 01:14:50 +0000 UTC]

love your changes xD cant wait to read

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PriestNeftis In reply to MarieJaneWorks [2016-01-16 16:10:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you omgggg!! I'll do my best xD

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HiroMamoru [2014-01-21 04:10:21 +0000 UTC]

Huh,interesting

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PriestNeftis In reply to HiroMamoru [2014-01-22 16:31:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you ovo~~

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Sarahalexis13 [2013-08-03 01:31:25 +0000 UTC]

cool

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PriestNeftis In reply to Sarahalexis13 [2013-08-03 17:21:39 +0000 UTC]

thanks c:

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Sarahalexis13 In reply to PriestNeftis [2013-08-04 19:07:56 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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Dustyfootwarrior [2013-04-22 00:54:43 +0000 UTC]

scary kuribohs

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PriestNeftis In reply to Dustyfootwarrior [2013-05-11 21:47:19 +0000 UTC]

lol xD

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asamreen78 [2013-02-02 18:06:42 +0000 UTC]

This. Is. So. Amazing.

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PriestNeftis In reply to asamreen78 [2013-02-03 18:50:01 +0000 UTC]

waaah thanks

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PrayerGirl1 [2013-01-26 03:27:34 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty cool, So help me though, who is the white haired person and and the one with black hair?

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PriestNeftis In reply to PrayerGirl1 [2013-01-26 03:51:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you hehe xD they are ocs, you can find their info in the artist's comment ^^

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PrayerGirl1 In reply to PriestNeftis [2013-01-26 05:08:04 +0000 UTC]

Yep!

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kelekiahshadya [2013-01-25 19:51:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm so excited for this doujin! It's going to be so awesome, I can feel it! I'm especially excited to see your perspectives and your headcanon

This picture is super adorable! I love the children approach, especially since you know none of them are children anymore. I also like the more simplistic coloring style for this. It makes me think younger and more innocent than your detailed paintings do.
All the same, I love the coloring and the shading. It's still so detailed (and I'm so jealous, OTL).
I agree with you that Mahad's peering head and cute smile are a must for this picture. The way you did his outfit behind Neftis is what makes him look extra taller. If it'd looked like he was sitting on something, it would look more natural.
But that doesn't take too much away from the piece as a whole, so I think that's good
I love the expressions and the things each child is doing. It gives it such a cute and innocent feel.
I also adore the Kuriboh army. Absolutely fantastic ^^

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PriestNeftis In reply to kelekiahshadya [2013-01-25 20:34:10 +0000 UTC]

OMG xDDDDDDD and I hope you will like it ;W;

hehe yep xD well it has something to do with the plot too c: you will see x3333
OMG I'm very very glad you like it ;u; (don't be jealous OTL ;A; alskjalkfjafas)
haha yeah xDDD but...I'm a lazy butt what can I do ;U; lol
thanks Kel-san!!!! x3333 I'm so glad you like this ;u;
Kuroboh FTW

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kelekiahshadya In reply to PriestNeftis [2013-02-06 15:18:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure I will. I love what you've done so far Who's to say I won't love the rest?

I'm excited to see XD
I LOVE IT~ (But I cannot help my jealousy!)
I understand that. It's fun to be lazy XD
You're welcome!!! I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
Yay~ Kuribohs are the best!

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PriestNeftis In reply to kelekiahshadya [2013-02-06 21:47:27 +0000 UTC]

I hope so!!! xD

thanks

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kelekiahshadya In reply to PriestNeftis [2013-02-06 23:09:07 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!!

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Aoidashi [2013-01-25 04:58:33 +0000 UTC]

wow no sabia que querías hacer un Doujinshi.
se ve que sera interesante la verdad ademas el pintado quedo tan hermoso. me gusta muchísimo >w<

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PriestNeftis In reply to Aoidashi [2013-01-25 05:08:02 +0000 UTC]

ouo hehe xD bueno la imagen de Atem y Neftis en el balcón amaneciendo era un spoiler del doujin es un proyecto que decidí hacer hace mas de un año y que incluso habia comenzado a bocetear pero que no pude ni siquiera empezar de forma seria o3o ahora que tengo tiempo quiero terminarlo 8)
muchas gracias!!! ;U; espero te gusten las páginas

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Aoidashi In reply to PriestNeftis [2013-01-25 05:13:40 +0000 UTC]

por supuesto que me gustara, tu historia es muy interesante la verdad me encanto total mente sera muy interesante leer el Doujinshi >w<

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PriestNeftis In reply to Aoidashi [2013-01-25 05:49:32 +0000 UTC]

hehe gracias >3<

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blue-sky-girl [2013-01-25 04:03:01 +0000 UTC]

diosssssssssssssss esta genial!

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PriestNeftis In reply to blue-sky-girl [2013-01-25 04:08:43 +0000 UTC]

gracias!!! x3

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PRFan [2013-01-25 00:37:55 +0000 UTC]

Wiii, un comic de estos dos! Va a estar buenísimo!

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PriestNeftis In reply to PRFan [2013-01-25 02:41:42 +0000 UTC]

hehehe hai xDDDDD a ver que te parece >u< gracias!!!!

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ShootingStar03 [2013-01-24 10:11:39 +0000 UTC]

i cANNNOT WAIT FOR THIS OK SIS I AM GOING TO ENJOY READING THIS GSHJDFK

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PriestNeftis In reply to ShootingStar03 [2013-01-24 18:02:55 +0000 UTC]

OMFG AND I'M SO EXCITED YOU'RE EXCITED OMG SISSY HOPE YOU WILL LIKE IT ;A;!!!!! THANK YOUUUUU ILUUU

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ShootingStar03 In reply to PriestNeftis [2013-01-25 14:10:11 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW I WILL LOVE IT OKAAAAY I HOPE YOU MAKE A COMPILATION OF SOME SORTS YESSSS <333

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PriestNeftis In reply to ShootingStar03 [2013-01-25 19:10:02 +0000 UTC]

laflakjfhalkjfsalkjfa OKAYYYYY THANK YOU SO MUCH OMG ILU ;W; I WILL I WILL

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ShootingStar03 In reply to PriestNeftis [2013-01-27 15:31:46 +0000 UTC]

GEEWD

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Ravengirl241 [2013-01-24 03:50:37 +0000 UTC]

so excited for it!!! Can't wait!! omg I just want to hug Atemie he looks sooo cute! :3

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PriestNeftis In reply to Ravengirl241 [2013-01-24 04:11:21 +0000 UTC]

hehehe thank you o much hun!!! x333 I will uploading the first pages tomorrow kay?
hahaha yeah XD he's such a cutie pie

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Ravengirl241 In reply to PriestNeftis [2013-01-25 00:37:57 +0000 UTC]

:glomps: omg i saw them and they were so amazingly drawn!! I wanna go to your school if that's where you learn to draw! lol sorry I'm just happy cuz I got baby cousin feeling better and now he's sleeping next to me on my bed :3

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PriestNeftis In reply to Ravengirl241 [2013-01-25 03:09:23 +0000 UTC]

haha xDDDD it's all about practice hun school has taugh me to draw realistic faces, anatomy, composition, etc xP but not how to draw anime c: I only applied the knowledge and practiced a lot nwn you can do it ;3
oh, that's great! I'm glad c:

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Ravengirl241 In reply to PriestNeftis [2013-01-25 03:20:41 +0000 UTC]

I'll be sure to practice a lot then :3 that an practice my writing lol

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PriestNeftis In reply to Ravengirl241 [2013-01-25 03:52:19 +0000 UTC]

haha xD sure! good luck

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Ravengirl241 In reply to PriestNeftis [2013-01-25 15:54:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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