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profdaredevil — Calming Tea
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Published: 2015-02-02 04:08:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 910; Favourites: 60; Downloads: 36
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A nice weather to enjoy tea. :3Related content
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What a beautiful picture. Faved and saved! My only criticism is of the quite flat texture you used on her kimono. I think it detracts from the excellent rendering of the folds in the kimono, and the wonderful three dimensionality of the piece as a whole. The blurred focus of the background is excellent and contributes to the soft lighting/glowy effect of the image.
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I really appreciate the comments and critiques uve written above. Yes, I'm aware of the layer on top of the clothing is monotonous, contradicting the cloth's shading. It seems that I slacked too much on this one. And its hard to get back to the drawing to edit out all the kinks atm. Thanks for the feedback, and enjoy my upcoming artwork. And sorry for replying so late.
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Yeah man I know it can be a hassle to receive critiques for pieces that you've already finished and uploaded. I can't resist giving them anyway though haha. I should note that in terms of first impressions, the pattern later definitely adds rather than detracts.
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