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To-Ka-Ro [2014-01-11 12:43:40 +0000 UTC]

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First , I feel the need to say good job on the posing! It's a very dynamic and interesting pose that still shows the whole body.

I do want to go over the motion and rigging of it.

Remember to always think how a character gets into that positioning. Did she crouch from a standing position? Ok, if she did, her hair will swing upwards as well as her clothes from the motion of going downward. Did she slide into the position from running? Then her hair will pull the opposite way, as well as her clothes.

Also, pay very close attention when rigging the spine. How you curve the spine will put even more dynamic into your picture. Is she super intense? Try bending her posture and shoulders a bit more downwards towards her center of gravity. There are other things you can do with spine that portray other attitudes. I would encourage reading up on body language, as well as taking a look at these few tutorials, if you wish:
goblinqueeen.deviantart.com/ar…
to-ka-ro.deviantart.com/art/Ho…
to-ka-ro.deviantart.com/art/qu…

Be careful in after editing also, especially with the contrast. I have a little but of a hard time separating her from her background

Again, I just really enjoy the overall pose, and especially the placement of the feet. Good job making them less stationary and implying movement there e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Good job and happy creating!

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sky-commander [2014-01-12 19:44:28 +0000 UTC]

if you ever need more guns or tanks and the likes, i have a ton in my gallery! it's like all i am good at.. :/

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PercyJacksonLover335 [2014-01-12 15:51:21 +0000 UTC]

Cool! Nice work on it.

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