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Published: 2010-01-07 04:16:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 2069; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 0
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Description Sorry just spanish :/ if you want to read use google translator

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bien este dibujo esta inspirada en Zodico-Moderato <3 es una genial cancion, cuando la escuche pese que era de Zóe O.o es que tiene efectos muy no se metalicos XDD y ademas sentia nostalgia por dibujar a esta pareja

bueno disfruten, comenten y critiquen ^^

Zodiaco:

Ya no quiero, pelear más
Estoy muy triste porque todo va mal
Desesperado fui a buscar
Las revistas que te gusta comprar

Y descubrí, algo fatal
No lo puedo ni lo quiero gritar
Y no eres tú, ni soy yo
Son los planetas que nos dicen que no

No falta amor, ni pasión
Es el zodiaco que nos separa a los dos

Dicen, que tú eres de agua
Y yo soy de fuego
Tal vez en otra vida mi cielo
Los astros no te alejen de mí, De mí

Quiero, hacer del universo Un infierno
Para que nunca mas nos de miedo
Lo que el zodiaco dice de ti, y de mí

Sagitario corazón de metal
Piscis quiere siempre ir al mar
Leo del reven no lo puedes sacar
Géminis Virgo son sexuales no más
Aries y Tauro no les gusta el break dance
luego Escorpión siempre quiere rockear
Cáncer Zafo no lo quiero nombrar
Acuario son raros, pero es lo que hay
Capricornio egoísta total
Géminis Virgo son sexuales no más

Ya consulte, tu carta astral
Y No tienes nada que me pueda gustar

Y no eres tú, ni soy yo
Son los planetas que nos dicen que no
No falta amor, ni pasión
Es el zodiaco que nos separa a los dos

Dicen, que tú eres de agua
Y yo soy de fuego
Tal vez en otra vida mi cielo
Los astros no te alejen de mí, De mí

Quiero, hacer del universo, Un infierno
Para que nunca mas nos de miedo
Lo que el zodiaco dice de ti y de mí

Dicen que soy de Marte
Y tú eres de Venus
Tal ves en otra vida mi cielo
Los astros no te alejen de mí, De mí.

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Deidara: Kishimoto masashi
Melissa: =pukydog
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Comments: 49

kankansgirl [2010-01-07 22:32:24 +0000 UTC]

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Cause this piece deserves a DECENT critique.



Basic Summary:

This is probably got to be the best piece I have critiqued of yours. Everything is done really well. I think this will probably be the thing I've critiqued of yours with the highest Deviantion Rating. *3*
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Detailed Summary:

Vision: e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="No Star" />

I have been waiting for a long time to be able to give you a high star rating on the vision part! I think this shows a lot of emotion, especially the song it was inspired by. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="26" height="17" alt="" title="Love" /> The way you symbolize it is really great to hun! I really don't see why this would get a low vision rating.

Originality: e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Half Star" />

The originality of this piece is quite high. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)" /> I have seen a lot of pics with yin and yang and a couple like this, or just siblings even friends and enemies, but never like with the use of this song. So I see no real reason to give it low on this either no critiquing needed. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />

Technique: e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="No Star" />

This is well done as well. The way you did the water and fire is great, but the water kind of reminds me of air. Maybe you should try adding some darker lines of blue and blurring/blending it into. Or better yet look up some water coloring tutorials. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" /> However you can still tell it's water. The fire you can tell is fire and I see no improvement that I can help with. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)" /> Maybe make the edges a little less smooth?

The BG is good, however I wish you would make stars on your own just to see how well you can do them. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Sad)" /> Maybe even add a little gradient and effects to make it look even more like a sky, add depth to it. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" /> Again however I can still tell it's a sky/in space.

Coloring on the characters is greatly done as usaual and I see in no way how I could help here, besides everyone has there own coloring style. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)" /> I do see some spots that could use a little more shading like under Deidei's belly.

Lineart is smooth and clean and crisp as ever so I can't say anything about that either.

Impact: e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!" />e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Half Star" />

This piece had a great impact on me! I can just feel the emotion in it. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="26" height="17" alt="" title="Love" /> There expressions perfect as well. The way you had colored it had a good part of it's impact on me to. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)" /> The simple idea of this to.

Other:

Anatomy:

As I have said before the muzzles are a little long. So you still need to practice! However this IS your style and it wouldn't look like yours if you stopped that, so I don't care if you ever do fix it. You should seriously start adding the other eye it makes it look a lot better, and shows more emotion in the character as well. I do understand that there hair is over the eyes, still if the hair were to flow up a bit from the wind it would add more depth to the piece and a little more realistic. Especially on Deidei.

In this picture they seem to have a little more longer bodies then what a wolf should have. However it does look as if they are leaping so an extended body isn't much to worry about. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)" /> Your front legs look a bit weird, so maybe you should practice them more, or maybe it's just me. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..." /> Back legs look fine. Everything else looks really good. Maybe give there tails different poistions?

One last thing, Deidei's ear closest to Melissa looks a bit bigger for what it should be at this perspective, also there is a possibilty that I think it should be pointing back. I think I understand what you were trying make it look like there were doing.

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I hope this helps a bit dear. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..." /> Again I think my crits keep getting worse and worse.

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pukydog In reply to kankansgirl [2010-01-07 23:38:59 +0000 UTC]

yep I think it maybe is XD

yep I think the same :/

them are not like ying and yang XD is just that the song talks about the zodiacal signs, it says "Dicen que tu eres de agua y yo soy de fuego" that means: their say that you are water and me fire XD

o.. rly? I wanted to do it as a wave of water XD so that means it's not good :/

maybe next time I'll try ^^

and O.o I added gradient of 2 blues XDDDD

hahaha sorry I messed the shadow in there a lil... so yeah :/ maybe I can't correct that :C maybe is just part of me .-. kay' I'll try!

yup but their are not wolves XD their are dogs, so I'm still pretty bad on them, gotta practice :<

maybe XD I never thought about it... huh true O.o

it helps a lot dear

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kankansgirl In reply to pukydog [2010-01-08 00:30:07 +0000 UTC]

I know what I meant was I have seen a lot of pictures like that that is similar to this.

Hmmm, well if it has just crashed into some it does look like a wave. I didn't consider that either, I was thinking it was more like a river just flowing. xD;;;

On the BG? oO

It's ok.I was just saying.

Sorry I meant dogs. xD I'm so use to using the word wolf instead of dog since there are so many wolf artists on here instead of dogs. xD No no your really good at them it was just a mistake on my end!

I'm glad it does~ <3

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pukydog In reply to kankansgirl [2010-01-08 01:05:10 +0000 UTC]

but XD was not my idea to try to make it as ying and yang :C

ohh XD I see

O.o yes under the flames and water XD

kay' XD I'll practice don't worry

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OniNatsuyo [2010-01-07 21:38:09 +0000 UTC]

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Well this is my frist critique hope it helps and I don't suck at it XD
Well frist off I'd like to start off with the good things
frist of all I want to say that you have alot of good things here and you show off a unique and wounderful style that is adorble in everyway. Also the color style used within the pic is soft which makes it easy and wounderful to look at if it were more heavy and bright causeing it to be harder to look at witch the type of idea here you shown with the background, the water, the flame, and of cause Dei and Mel. Which makes me bring to a nethr point that I really like and may people wouldn't see is that the water and flame are in somewhat in a liner format makeing the eye fouse at the main subjet Dei and Mel also makes me think of the yin-yang symbel. Also like Mel's shadow in the water ^_^. Also I really want to say is I really like hope both Deidara and Mel look relaxed evey thing about how you did them shows this which is really nice :3
Now to good critique helpful hints(hopefuly XD)
Frist of all I too say is that some of the legs look abit long try useing a pet as a refence and move too see the lenghts of things are at the angle or use refence images there always good. But don't worry it doesn't change the fact that both Dei and Mel are both wounderful here. Also one thing to try adding more flow lines to water to show flowness within it also a cool idea to maybe try is reflations of Mel within the water this would have a wunderful impact to the calmness of the water.
So this is the end of my critique^_^
sorry I chould use the song to compair the idea with but I chouldn't find it D: but I will still sherch seeing it sounds like a really cool song to cheack out.
Hopefuly this helps you and can't wait to see more works from you soon e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="38" height="15" alt="" title="Hug" />
p.s I'm so very sorry for my spelling ;3;

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koubra [2010-01-07 09:30:08 +0000 UTC]

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Wow....i just don't know where to start *_* it's realy beautiful and the shading is great, i know i have heard of this song somwhere, but lets start with thre art , the colours are just soft as allways i realy like the markings ^^ i love the colours of the water and the flames ^^ , the poses are very original ^^ they are fantastic ^^

the stars are great too, the small and the big ^^ and the beautiful night sky. And i got to say melissa's expression is fantastic.
Well so is deidei's XD but i realy like them both ^^ if i have time i will draw alot of fanart for the couple XD , It was nice giving you a critique like allways ^^ reply if you would like! I'll do it again some time :3

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pukydog In reply to koubra [2010-01-07 14:27:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks XD so shading is a really special technique I did whit Pain tool sai, is easy and seems really good but still a secret

flames and water was so hard :3 took like an hour O.o

thanks I though expressions seems weird XDD

hahah thanks I would like to :3 must been awesome ^^

I like your critique but plz if you are going to give a low rating, explain why, and make me see my mistakes in there, a critique like this don't help a lot just many lovey dovey words

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naruto1084oc [2012-01-30 02:30:31 +0000 UTC]

This is love

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Yuki-Koopa [2010-01-09 15:48:04 +0000 UTC]

esta precioso loka, hace mucho que no veia un dibujo de deimel, a diferencia de los dibujos anteriores de esta pareja se nota que haz progresado muchisimo hasta incluso parece k melissa se ve mas adulta
por cierto la sombra purpura le da un buen efecto en los pelajes

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pukydog In reply to Yuki-Koopa [2010-01-09 15:54:43 +0000 UTC]

grax we <3 pos es que me taba aguantando las ganas XDDD
nahh ni tanto aun se ven mdio raros lolz, O.o en eso no me habia fijado XD pero es cierto O:

<3 sip me gusta tambien como se ve, es como la 5 vez que la use y creeo que me he enamorado de ese comor para sombrear XD

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Lezzette [2010-01-09 02:51:06 +0000 UTC]

muy lindo pekeña

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pukydog In reply to Lezzette [2010-01-09 02:51:48 +0000 UTC]

nu mi digas peque O:!!! hahaha de todos modos gracias ^^

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DarkChocaholic [2010-01-07 20:30:26 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful work! ^^ Its beautiful Puky!

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pukydog In reply to DarkChocaholic [2010-01-08 01:03:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you, dear

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DarkChocaholic In reply to pukydog [2010-01-08 02:25:33 +0000 UTC]

joo are welcome ^^ (hey what do you think is happening wiff Nellofox lately?? O.o I will talk to you in a note some more ^^)

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pukydog In reply to DarkChocaholic [2010-01-08 02:38:04 +0000 UTC]

kay ^^

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Neko-mirichan [2010-01-07 16:05:36 +0000 UTC]

Esta lindo mami la cancion no la he escuchado, pero la letra es linda

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pukydog In reply to Neko-mirichan [2010-01-07 16:07:46 +0000 UTC]

X3 grax y pos la cancion esta padre XD no linda por que es de moderato, si quieres buscala en youtube ^^

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Neko-mirichan In reply to pukydog [2010-01-07 16:09:42 +0000 UTC]

XD entonces padre pero fea??

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pukydog In reply to Neko-mirichan [2010-01-07 16:16:10 +0000 UTC]

no O: solo digo que no esta linda asi ayy que primura de cancion XD

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Neko-mirichan In reply to pukydog [2010-01-07 16:27:37 +0000 UTC]

ah!! ya entendi *no me culpes, en el test de APH resulté Veneciano XD*

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pukydog In reply to Neko-mirichan [2010-01-07 19:12:50 +0000 UTC]

XDD yo resulte muy rusa O.o

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AnatomiGirl [2010-01-07 15:53:08 +0000 UTC]

es lindisimo! he escuchado la cancion y me encanta *__* te salen muy bien las patas de atras ^^

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pukydog In reply to AnatomiGirl [2010-01-07 16:02:30 +0000 UTC]

gracias y si es una buena cacion para ser de moderato XDD

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AnatomiGirl In reply to pukydog [2010-01-07 16:05:57 +0000 UTC]

de nada x3 jeje see

oye, una cosa, esque no te llevas bien con nello ?

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pukydog In reply to AnatomiGirl [2010-01-07 16:09:11 +0000 UTC]

realmente no mucho :/ la ve mas como una persona mofolefestafa que cofomofo ufunafa afamifigafa (hablo en F)

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AnatomiGirl In reply to pukydog [2010-01-07 16:11:24 +0000 UTC]

omg si vale XD

es verdad que a veces puede molestar un poquito bastante :/ y creo que lo unico que quiere es ser amiga de RK, para que le haga dibujos y tal :C

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pukydog In reply to AnatomiGirl [2010-01-07 16:15:33 +0000 UTC]

algo :/ jamas me ha dicho que le dibuje algo pero mofolefestafa mufuchofo quefe sofolofo tefe afalafaguefe y ufusefe mufuchofo afa mifi OC mefelifissafa afadefemafas esfes afalgofo rafarafa... y sufu OC mufuy Mary-sue U__U

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AnatomiGirl In reply to pukydog [2010-01-07 16:19:53 +0000 UTC]

see siempre lo efta dibujando xD see yo pienso lo mismo, ademaf ef muy pefada :/

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pukydog In reply to AnatomiGirl [2010-01-07 17:21:48 +0000 UTC]

XD asi no se habla en F XDDD todo se divide en silabas y las que termine en vocal se les agraga F y la vocal como hola.. seria "hofolafa" U__U sifi yofo lafa defejofo poforquefe sifi, nofo mefe ifimpofortafa mufuchofo sifi ufun pofocofo

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AnatomiGirl In reply to pukydog [2010-01-07 18:28:55 +0000 UTC]

tiyo tise tihatiblar ticon tila titi ( yo se hablar pero con la ti XD )

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pukydog In reply to AnatomiGirl [2010-01-07 19:05:24 +0000 UTC]

XD asi no se habla con la T o si? seteritiata atasiti que yo sepa con todas las letras es una la misma regala

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AnatomiGirl In reply to pukydog [2010-01-07 19:12:01 +0000 UTC]

XD en mi instituto cuando no queremos que los profes sepan de k estamos hablando hablamos con la ti xD mejor hablamos en F, ademas ella no sabe español xD

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pukydog In reply to AnatomiGirl [2010-01-07 19:15:05 +0000 UTC]

ahh

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nellofox [2010-01-07 04:23:41 +0000 UTC]

Nice job Mel!!

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pukydog In reply to nellofox [2010-01-07 14:30:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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nellofox In reply to pukydog [2010-01-07 18:12:14 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome I love your art!!
Is very beautiful.

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pukydog In reply to nellofox [2010-01-07 19:04:10 +0000 UTC]

.... thanks...

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nellofox In reply to pukydog [2010-01-07 19:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Whats the matter Mel?

oh and by the way, I drew my contest entry's sketch but I may take a while to finish it.
I hope you don't mind dear

You and Prussia look so cute in it!!
X3

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pukydog In reply to nellofox [2010-01-07 19:14:08 +0000 UTC]

no any, is just the the only thing you say is that I'm awesome and such things like, got me so bored

^^ yay

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nellofox In reply to pukydog [2010-01-07 19:22:23 +0000 UTC]

I run out of things to say...sorry.
I don't mean to upset you.
Your one of my favorite artists.
Now I feel weird like I bore you all to death.
I will not comment so much if it bothers you.
I will just say "good job" if thats all you need once in a while.

It is hard for me because I don't know you in person yet.
But I wish I did

I only wish for you to get better as well as myself
Thats why I'm your friend. Sorry if I'm creepy.
I lost a lot of friends that way.

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pukydog In reply to nellofox [2010-01-07 19:31:44 +0000 UTC]

nahh... it's ok but you say the same on most of the comments like "good job" "awesome" can you try to point mistakes on your crits plz? you are not helping just whit nice words

comments don't bother me, the thing that is annoying is that you say the same

...

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nellofox In reply to pukydog [2010-01-07 20:21:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I just don't know what to say sometimes.
I don't like to point out errors but if you want me to I will next time.
Ok I will tell yu something like this next time:

You did very well, but you may need to improve on some of these things
and then I will tell what it is. How does that work?

Mel, sometimes you don't say much of mine but it is ok if you don't.
Trust me, my inbox is full every day. Wolfuto is getting a little bit popular.
and then I get flamed a lot too. But I ignored the last few flamings.
^^ And also, You inspired me to try harder. I do see you as a very great friend and I
enjoy talking with you even though we have our akward moments

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pukydog In reply to nellofox [2010-01-08 01:16:13 +0000 UTC]

kay'

yeah better now

ya mine too.. a lil

but flamings are most real :C I saw what the girl put as the proves sorry I don't trust you so much

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nellofox In reply to pukydog [2010-01-08 01:21:55 +0000 UTC]

b-but... I did draw it on my own.
I really did...Now I feel like I...wanna dissapear
And I did not come to dA to be seen as
a theif or a bad person.
I came to be friends with you guys.

I wanted to be your friend...
but now I lost all your trust.
It was mere couincidence I swear.
I did not cause on perpose.

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pukydog In reply to nellofox [2010-01-08 01:28:47 +0000 UTC]

you copied poses.. seems like :/

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nellofox In reply to pukydog [2010-01-08 01:33:29 +0000 UTC]

I don't trace ever.
I did reference pose for Sakura.
BUT YOU CAN'T COPYRIGHT POSE!! So why are they on my tail!!
is true.

But with Konan I swear it was totally
my own style.

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pukydog In reply to nellofox [2010-01-08 01:36:56 +0000 UTC]

dunno :/

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nellofox In reply to pukydog [2010-01-08 01:41:09 +0000 UTC]

I will possibly be gone soon anyway.
I can't take the fea and pain any longer.
I know how I drew it.
And I swear I am not a bad girl.
I love you guys like real friends because I
don't really have many in reality.

I will miss you Mel.

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