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I would have had this finished yesterday, but I didn't want to finish the shading :T Technically its a day early if I'm going to pick Monday for the weekly updates, but it could also be right on time if I go by the last time I uploaded a page ;D
I hate the head shots in this one, but the first and last panels are love <3
Yup, not much happening in this page sorry x3 but you get to know mysterious-voiced-cat's name; Clover!
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not quite, this isn't a warriors comic!
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i thought recognized some of the namesβ¦.
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hehe Hi thair :3
I randomly saw your acc on konokiri adoption blog thingi and thought to check out your comic~
Well I must say, GREAT storyline!!
keep it up ^^ I am certainly interested in the next page.
Although, I do have some minor sugesstions.
Well I think (the comic is great and the designs also), but I think that you should practice cat anatomy. I Understand that its partitially your style, but you really should. It helps alot, belive me (I practice wolf anatomy).
Just search 'cat anatomy' and you should find whaty ou're looking for.
Why am I telling you this?
well because cats dont actually look like on the way you draw them. Lets be honest ^^
I noticed you're handling well with the paws (I always have trouble with paws x3)
but the muscles and the shape of the legs isn't quite right. I'm no expert myself, but I think you just need a bit more practice in anatomy
I hope you don't take is an offence, because I really do like your comic and can't wait for the next page!
I just like to advice and help people who could use it~
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Thanks so much, I love reading crits on my work, they help me to know exactly what to work on C:
I'm not quite sure what anatomy means, though I do read about it a lot and I think you're talking about the skeleton and the way everything in connected to make it look as realistic as possible and close to the real thing, I know enough to not make some places bend but I'll look up more stuff since several people have mentioned it.
Honestly, I'm not trying to be realistic with my drawings xD I like it when the heads and eyes and ears are big, it gives them a more younger look I think, and helps make expressions easy to draw and recognize. if that's the part of the anatomy you're wanting me to look at I'm not going to change it x3 but if you mean leg placement and the poses I have them do, sometimes I know that its not physically possible for the cats to pull off some of the things I have them do, but its a drawing, not a still-life~
But thank you for your advice, I'll go right ahead and look up some anatomy and apply it to the page I'm working on now
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hehe
Alrighti then. You're welcome <3~
And hmm how to say... anatomy is.. yes its the skeleton of the animal, the muscles, and all in all; anatomy is basically a cats, dogs, horse's build. Body build
Hehe yeah thats what I meant, that that's your style, and that i kinda know what you're aiming for. Younger looks, and basically, keeping your own style in the drawing
Oh and for expressions, the easiest way is to draw a circly (which represents the head), then ..
ersh idk how ot explain it.. how about I draw it ^^
It's a technique every artist uses. Well 98% of them
it works on every animal, but, for example, on a horse: its the same technique, but different shapes.I hope youre getting what im saying XD
Well ill quickly sketch the technique for ya, so keep an eye on my gallery okay?
I wish to help you because some day you will become a better artist, and its best to start learning now ^_^
Yeah i understand fully.
And I'm glad you took your time to read my comment, thanks β₯~
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I'm not sure if I commented on the last one... if I didn't I'll comment on that later.. sorry 
Oooo, the first panel with Clover is absolutely amazing!! 
The last panel has great gesture as well, I love the way the main character cat is sitting, looks awesome, and the expressions, as always are awesome.
O.o I realized I haven't commented on two pages!! D: D: I'm so so sorry! 
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Lol the dead mice are cute. XD
And nice job, quick updates as usual, but your new character once again looks way too much like the main cat. She's basically a female version of him, and even if they are related, things could get confusing later on in action scenes. I'm not sure how you could fix it or even that you have to, but I see a bit too much gray here. But as I said, nice work, and I see more detail and less blurring on that brick wall, yay!
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Don't worry, it wont be confusing later on, the three cats are actually only in this one scene for the whole story. because of some dramatic events later, mostly Clover and Main Character Cat are together, Benjax however....
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Well clover and the main cat really do look alike. But as long as they are not together too much, i suppose it's alright.
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*I'm not sure how you could fix that or even if you have to
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oh so other mysterious cat apears to be a female named clover, main character cat seems very happy to see Clover Hmmmm it seems we are getting to know everyones name but the main character cat >w>
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Yes, in the script I have his name said in the very last page of the chapter, but I think i'm gonna make clover say his name before the flashback.
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lol as always saved by the female she cat thats why females are awesome
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xDD well, main character cat is wimpy. ;D
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lol X3 im livestreaming if you want to join the party ^^
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