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Tasbard [2007-10-10 23:43:14 +0000 UTC]
The last five lines are incredible. Oh my god.
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pyro3025 In reply to Tasbard [2007-10-11 00:12:01 +0000 UTC]
thanks Matt, they are my favorite too. I spent longer on those lines, getting them just right than I did on the rest of the poem.
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danielwheeler [2007-10-10 03:34:01 +0000 UTC]
hey, can i use this for a song and let you hear the song before i release it? or maybe another thing you wrote?
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pyro3025 In reply to danielwheeler [2007-10-10 19:18:54 +0000 UTC]
sure, I would love to hear it. I never imagined it as a song but I'm intrested to see what you do with it. Let me know if you want help tweaking it.
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danielwheeler In reply to pyro3025 [2007-10-11 05:06:23 +0000 UTC]
sweetness. you rock. i might do the vocals on this one. my other band member does the vocals for the other songs, but he said i need to do some too so he isn't like the lead singer figure.
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pyro3025 In reply to danielwheeler [2007-10-11 20:35:51 +0000 UTC]
kool, but I thought you liked the other one better? I've chage pronouns on both and e-mail them to you in like an hour or two, I wrote another one that might work if you want me to play with it a little.
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danielwheeler In reply to pyro3025 [2007-10-17 20:40:42 +0000 UTC]
ok. cool. u're awesome. how much do u want for them?
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pyro3025 In reply to danielwheeler [2007-10-17 21:05:24 +0000 UTC]
huh...do you seriously intend to pay me for my peotry? no, just do it justice.
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danielwheeler In reply to pyro3025 [2007-10-17 21:07:06 +0000 UTC]
ok. coolio! and my band will give you full credit. we think that the writer is just as much part of the song as the guitar vocals and drums.
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pyro3025 In reply to danielwheeler [2007-10-17 21:19:03 +0000 UTC]
k I can't wait to hear it...is this the only one ya'll are using ?(just curious)
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danielwheeler In reply to pyro3025 [2007-10-17 22:56:43 +0000 UTC]
can we also do the 1 that was like mr. dragonfly or whatever it was called?
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pyro3025 In reply to danielwheeler [2007-10-17 23:09:59 +0000 UTC]
sure...it is my favorite! I guess it could work with ya'll as guys....if you want to go for it. I am bored in my history class a lot and that is when I write most of these some in spanish and even a few in geometry, but if you have anything you'd like me to try let me know cuz I'm kinda low on ideas.
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danielwheeler In reply to pyro3025 [2007-10-17 23:16:55 +0000 UTC]
actually, we write most of our stuff, but if i get an idea or someone else does and the words hate us, i'll write you.
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pyro3025 In reply to danielwheeler [2007-10-18 00:58:00 +0000 UTC]
k and even if you don wanna use it I write poems for my friends all the time just cuz I run out of ideas.
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danielwheeler In reply to pyro3025 [2007-10-18 20:55:22 +0000 UTC]
cool. we're in the process of moving so it'll be awhile before i can send you the complete songs.
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pyro3025 In reply to danielwheeler [2007-10-18 21:06:26 +0000 UTC]
it's okay I am a pretty patient person.
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1billy12345 [2007-10-09 22:16:14 +0000 UTC]
that was a awesome poem and i am sorry 4 him saying no
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pyro3025 In reply to 1billy12345 [2007-10-09 22:40:52 +0000 UTC]
it's not your fault, don't be sorry.
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1billy12345 In reply to pyro3025 [2007-10-09 23:10:23 +0000 UTC]
but he dose'nt kno what he is missing and i am sorry that u are hurt
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pyro3025 In reply to 1billy12345 [2007-10-10 19:20:11 +0000 UTC]
I'm okay really. don worry about me.
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pyro3025 In reply to Princess-of-Ninjas [2007-10-09 21:28:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I think I'll be okay though. He was really nice about it and we are still staying friends so I didn't get him for myself, but atleast I didn't lose him.
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