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Published: 2005-03-31 17:30:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 113; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description What is perfect?
         WHY is perfect?
Why does perfect dangle
     above your sleepless heart
mocking you.
        mocking your stupidity.
           mocking your arrogance.
              mocking your innocence.
Perfect can lurk in your soul's shadows.
Waiting.
                   waiting to emotionally mug you.
But what if your wrong?
Wrong about perfect?
                             Can you be wrong about perfect?
              So here you are.
       Waiting to be wrong.
                                         Waiting for perfect to change.
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Comments: 1

FarDareisMai [2005-05-21 03:41:24 +0000 UTC]

I don't think the writing for this is bad, but honestly, I've read a lot of poems like it before. However, this isn't completely cliche. Most other poems approach the topic from an extremely angsty, rebellious, and resentful standpoint, whereas yours approaches in a more cerebral, philisophical way. Kudos for that, and definate kudos for the writing.

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