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Published: 2007-04-17 02:39:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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The world seems rawer then I hopedI went walking in the rain like a dope
I didn't think to put on a coat
But it does matter anyway
The rain isn't here to stay
I walked by their little house again
The fence stills needs a good mend
My logic can't defend
The reaons to keep walking
I can still here them talking
"Just call him Mr. Solitude
He's one lonely dude
He doesn't mean to be rude
But that's all he knows how to be
It's hard for him to see
His silence is taken as offence
But he's nice, in his defence
But I can remember ever since
She lefts he's been down
And stopped coming round"
I keep walking down the lonely road
Waiting on the future to unfold
I've never felt so old
But I guess thats the way
We're ment to pass our days
I know I shouldn't keep caring
But thats the ways it's wearing
But I am still daring
Fate to trust in me
It's too late you see
Cause I'm called Mr. Solitude
One lonely dude
I don't mean to be rude
But my silence is my shield
And I don't yeild
I know it's taken as offence
I don't mean it in my defence
But I can remember ever since
She walked away
This feelings here to stay
I can still here them calling out
"Mr. Solitude!" they shout
While I'm out and about
Like some sort of attack
But I let it roll off my back
Cause I'm called Mr. Solitude
One lonely dude
I don't mean to be rude
But I'm just the way I am
One lonely man
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Comments: 9
Very beautiful. I very much feel an intense connection with this myself. Thank you for the Art, as always. My best to you.
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I started it as song lyrics for a friend but towards the end it changed so poem it is. I hoped that Solitude (the name my friend goes by) liked it as much as you did. Thank you.
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It's cute and dark at the same time. Solitude and I were PMing each other, rhyming some weird poems back and forth a while ago. Want me to send 'em to ya?^^
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Sure, I love reading freeform, me and my cousin shanny had a fight once with nothing but rhyming back and forth, but I turned the tables by saying that despite how mad she made me, it only bothered me so much because I loved her and valued her view of me.
I got her crying. DX
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O.o MUST READ BOTTOM TO TOP!
In Pelty's old school,
On halloween night,
The lights turned down low,
And the candles....
....burn bright. MWUAHAHAHAHAHAH!! Night Pelt.
-- Previous Private Message --
Sent by : Flamingpelt
Sent : 17 March 2007 at 12:19am
Uhh...
T'was the Night of Halloween,
And all down the street,
All the kids were shouting,
"Trick or Treat!!!"-a bit from my school poem (I can't think up poetry real fast.)
-- Previous Private Message --
Sent by : Solitude
Sent : 17 March 2007 at 12:08am
I grasped it well,
It burned my hand,
Greetings to you,
From England.
-- Previous Private Message --
Sent by : Flamingpelt
Sent : 17 March 2007 at 12:07am
Solitude, a senior member,
How long has it been since we met? I can't remember,
Happy birthday to you in June,
I hope you get my flaming balloon D D
-- Previous Private Message --
Sent by : Solitude
Sent : 17 March 2007 at 12:03am
Flamingpelt, a senior member,
Merry Chistmas from december,
I hope have a lovely day,
Even though is long past May P P
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...That's just funny and cute. XD
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It was at like, 11:00pm (your time, too^^) and I was actually having fun. Remember how we would be up to 2:00am just talking in the good ol' days? It was just like that!
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Yeah, well, we still got good days, just gotta find that original passion. <3
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I think the AIM will help with that.^^
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