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Published: 2013-08-26 11:10:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 238; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description Desolation, my name
or was that my fame?
For I am unique in pain
and sorrow is my gain.

Trembling all my body
as if I were nobody
without anything to love
but hell in the sky above.

Agony, my name
prisoner of shame
no place to run away
for I'm left alone to pray.
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Comments: 13

mushroomsfaerie [2015-05-12 13:35:53 +0000 UTC]

It has a "tranquil" rythm, that is in contrast with the meaning of the poem.
I really like the figure of the warrior, with the "hell in the sky above".

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R-Bans In reply to mushroomsfaerie [2015-05-17 09:05:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm glad that you liked it

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mushroomsfaerie In reply to R-Bans [2015-05-17 10:25:23 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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MINA-GIRL [2013-09-17 20:57:26 +0000 UTC]

omg , this is so incredible , i feel like im looking in a mirror or something , it's like im looking to myself , great job!

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R-Bans In reply to MINA-GIRL [2013-09-17 21:17:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh, glad to read that! Looks like we have more things in common!

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MINA-GIRL In reply to R-Bans [2013-09-18 13:03:11 +0000 UTC]

<3

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R-Bans In reply to MINA-GIRL [2013-09-18 16:30:18 +0000 UTC]

<3

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veronikanecasova [2013-09-15 22:56:01 +0000 UTC]

i love this poem,i'll share it on my facebook for my friends

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R-Bans In reply to veronikanecasova [2013-09-15 23:02:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much dear! Hope your friends like it too

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Nephilim2013 [2013-09-04 12:06:14 +0000 UTC]

beautiful poetry

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R-Bans In reply to Nephilim2013 [2013-09-04 12:25:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much dear!

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veronikanecasova [2013-08-27 02:14:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for your poetry R-Bans,you are very talented. Yes,I understand,life isn't always about candy's ans sometimes we live in inner hell,but as great emperor said "...this too shall pass...." Β wish you wonderfull weekΒ 

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R-Bans In reply to veronikanecasova [2013-08-27 09:05:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for such nice words.
Yes, you're right, we could also argue that without darkness, there would'nt be light, so, sadness is necessary in order to achieve, and mantain, happiness.
Wish you a wonderful week too!

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