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Published: 2013-09-17 10:06:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 312; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Love, a hideous emotion,cradle of purity unborn
secret desire of devotion,
the rising of a soul's morn.
Love, a soul's fortress,
meteoric thirst for joy,
on your lips a caress
as if life was a toy.
Love, an ivory shield,
a cause worth dying for,
a need for you to yield
your heart evermore.
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Comments: 24
I've really enjoyed your poetry, but this one made me decide to comment. I especially loved that last verse, because "ivory shield" created a really lovely visual.
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Thank you very much for your kind words, dear, messages like yours make me smile and encourage me to keep on writing.
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You really should! Your work is wonderful.
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Well fuck,that's really impressive,not my favorite topic but you killed it
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I loved that "well fuck"! xD
Thank you very much for your kind words, honey!
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Hahah,why so? xD
You're very welcome sweetie,it's true.
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I don't know, just loved it!
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So tantalizing; nearly heartbreaking.~ Β
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Thank you very much for your kind words! I'm glad that you liked it, dear!
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You are quite welcome. I am glad you shared the piece.~
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Thank you. English is a foreign language, but I try to do my best.
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Wow!~ Well, very impressive. Your efforts pay off greatly.
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Ow, thank you dear! I really appreciate your words!
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