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Published: 2019-08-10 19:53:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1145; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Description it's too hot to do anything
so we harvest cucumbers,
the flowers like burning suns
above and below.
the wind postpones the scorching
until we're home.

i spot another one,
and another; rough globules
of water and seeds lie lazily
in the shade of parasols
of their own making,

as we continue our
dragging dialogue about
separation, divorce;
disappointment, relief.
it's your day to speak,

and it becomes clearer than ever
that you blame the bird
for eating, the heart
for beating, but i don't
blame you and me

for building a castle
in the sand, too tall
to stand.
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ikazon [2019-09-12 21:30:29 +0000 UTC]

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raido-ehwaz In reply to ikazon [2019-09-13 06:43:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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Poetrymann [2019-09-09 19:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Featured here
September, Volume 2

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pupillania by diosenzanomeAn Ocean Hides by PrRailgunGolden Hours by annewipf
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raido-ehwaz In reply to Poetrymann [2019-09-09 21:15:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, again

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satellitenotes [2019-09-05 02:19:04 +0000 UTC]

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raido-ehwaz In reply to satellitenotes [2019-09-05 06:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for your words! I like how you see the poem.

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YouInventedMe [2019-09-01 05:21:56 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD! So happy to move this from my favorites to my Lit DD collection.

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raido-ehwaz In reply to YouInventedMe [2019-09-01 07:37:39 +0000 UTC]

I really appreciate that, thanks!

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Poetrymann [2019-09-01 03:37:12 +0000 UTC]

Well deserved! Congratulations!🍾🎊 

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raido-ehwaz In reply to Poetrymann [2019-09-01 07:37:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for suggesting it!

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Poetrymann In reply to raido-ehwaz [2019-09-02 01:55:37 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure! It is an excellent poem.Β 

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raido-ehwaz In reply to Poetrymann [2019-09-02 09:59:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Yuukon [2019-08-31 16:00:46 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on your lovely DD

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raido-ehwaz In reply to Yuukon [2019-08-31 16:46:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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FROGGYBOOTY [2019-08-31 13:29:55 +0000 UTC]

pretty

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raido-ehwaz In reply to FROGGYBOOTY [2019-08-31 15:31:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Pajunen [2019-08-31 07:23:54 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!

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raido-ehwaz In reply to Pajunen [2019-08-31 15:31:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! A pleasant surprise this Saturday.

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Eefera [2019-08-29 04:12:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This imagery is amazing and refreshingly relatable. Most often these deep conversations happen during simple times.

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raido-ehwaz In reply to Eefera [2019-08-30 09:03:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you could relate to it, although I hope you're not in this situation.

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Eefera In reply to raido-ehwaz [2019-08-30 18:40:00 +0000 UTC]

Not necessarily the divorce specifically, but I’ve dealt with a lot of other issues surrounding abandonment. I think what resonated with me specifically was how these conversations always seem to happen while we are doing mundane things.
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raido-ehwaz In reply to Eefera [2019-08-31 15:33:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for sharing that! It's really interesting to hear what different people get from your work.

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JessaMar [2019-08-25 19:07:13 +0000 UTC]

There's quite a story in here.

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raido-ehwaz In reply to JessaMar [2019-08-25 21:37:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad that shows. Thanks for reading and for commenting!

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YouInventedMe [2019-08-14 01:46:04 +0000 UTC]

Marvelous.

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raido-ehwaz In reply to YouInventedMe [2019-08-14 04:59:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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Poetrymann [2019-08-11 14:13:59 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful imagery in this! Well done.Β 

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raido-ehwaz In reply to Poetrymann [2019-08-11 20:22:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, that means a lot.

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madhalf [2019-08-11 04:49:39 +0000 UTC]

This contains a lot of sad...

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raido-ehwaz In reply to madhalf [2019-08-11 12:01:57 +0000 UTC]

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madhalf In reply to raido-ehwaz [2019-08-12 03:32:51 +0000 UTC]

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