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the-upward-glance [2012-04-10 04:22:15 +0000 UTC]
I usually laugh these music memes off as being silly–mostly because of the song choices and/or the writing. Probably due to the numerous 14 year old girls who attempt this. But. I was pleasantly surprised with yours. While I'm not familiar with the songs you selected, by the titles I dug them, and your corresponding vignettes seemed to be in line with them. I particularly liked the first and last pieces. To me, they were cohesive and presented a short, yet captivating story. With the former, I enjoyed the raw carnality, the cruel and harsh desire coupled with the roadside feel. And as for the latter, the sardonic humor and the lowdown victory of the slighted protagonist were amusing. So many interesting OCs bro... I obvs don't know whose perspective you're utilizing in the second and third. But....can I get like, a sexual favor instead of a cookie for commenting? xD I get so inappropriate late at night. Only hangups were some repetitious phrasings and grammar issues. Nothing too major. Definitely room for improvement, but that's part of the writing experience. Yeah, so I found this most worthwhile, and it showed your ability to paint clear scenes with limited words. Good job.
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rainbowsexhair In reply to the-upward-glance [2012-04-10 04:34:13 +0000 UTC]
ohhhh lordy lol
thank you.
lol what favor you want?
these songs are under 5 minutes, so i didnt edit. i just was all eklajlaoijklameklajkag DONE. FUCKYES lol
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~~~~~~
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the-upward-glance In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-10 04:39:50 +0000 UTC]
Uhhh...a really good one? Wow, I so don't sound inexperienced at all. Herpaderp.
Wow, no editing hm? HAHA, nice.
Welcommmmmeeeeee~~~~
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-09 04:01:43 +0000 UTC]
OH NOES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! did you charge it?
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-09 04:05:21 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it goes to the start up screen, then it goes light (then it should go to the regular screen) but its stuck trying to get there ; _ ; it just stays there and won't do anything, so the only way to turn it off is to reset it (which makes the screen flash white) D: ...then it kills the battery and i have to re-charge it and it just goes in a circle.
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-09 04:17:53 +0000 UTC]
I'm pretty sure,
my mom is going to bring it in to some dude to change the battery though. I hope it gets fixed before I go on my trip next week though because 4 plane rides with the possibility of screaming babies/children would not be pleasant with no headphones & music
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-09 04:20:44 +0000 UTC]
yeah that would suck ass. id loan you mine but its very testy. hes a fragile little thing lol
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-09 04:28:00 +0000 UTC]
xD I used to always drop mine and it'd be fine, but it fell in my driveway and I that's when it stopped working. I like to buy cds and load them onto my zune and then put it away and my dads all "you're done already? that was like 3 minutes" and I'm all "yeah
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-09 04:31:11 +0000 UTC]
dude i use my cds so much that i have double replacements for my replacements of the originals lol
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-09 04:34:26 +0000 UTC]
damn lol
i just use them to put onto my zune... not really after that xD
but my uncle did get me an awesome stero set for christmas so i've been using them more on there
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-09 04:40:45 +0000 UTC]
haha nice. dude RECORD PLAYERRRRR. im so epic lol
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-09 04:43:52 +0000 UTC]
lol
i'm thinking about a cd player possibly... carry around a cd holderthinglol
noo neverr wellmaybe
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-09 04:54:26 +0000 UTC]
i have one if you want to borrow it for your trip
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-09 04:57:09 +0000 UTC]
nahh I'll probably be fine
thanks tho :3
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-09 05:11:44 +0000 UTC]
mtay. lemme know if you change your mind
dudeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. so not stoked for tomorrow. reality is back to slap our faces D:
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-09 05:16:29 +0000 UTC]
ok
yeah ik D:
idk if i have homework or not... I still need to check >.>
and then aims tuesday...i think its tuesday. need to check that too @_@
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-09 05:18:21 +0000 UTC]
shit son. i have too much shit to do. time to umm not go to sleep again. lol
how bout you? all nighter? dgaf? lol
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-09 05:25:56 +0000 UTC]
ahh
i have no homework yayy but I should work on my biography but xD
allnighterdgaf? mmm, i've been goin to bed at like 12 and 1 for the past two days and waking up at like 8:00 not tired at all (of course meaning that I'll be exhausted tomorrow) so... not to happy about that.
oh i just checked the school site and on the side calender thing it said "aimsmath tommorrow" and I'm all OHHH SHITTTTT AHHHGAHHASDFGBHJGKSDFNB
...but then it said tuesday
LIESS
yeah.
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-09 05:29:59 +0000 UTC]
i should do tons of shit but i think imma go to bed...cause i wanna sleep lol
dude, need any coffee? ill bring y'all a cup lol
umm....normally those things are two days...i think. dont ask me. my home is school most days lol
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-09 05:35:26 +0000 UTC]
kay ^^
mm coffee
yeah idk. i'll learn more about it tomorrow at school : x
xD I like staying home ; w ;
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-09 05:42:05 +0000 UTC]
i would too if i wasnt in pain *cries like the emo kid he is* lol
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-09 05:45:18 +0000 UTC]
xD aww D:
I'm going to get ready for bed, but I'll be drawing after because I want to ;D ...until my mom yells at me to go to sleep
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-09 05:46:32 +0000 UTC]
ill probably finish sketching out the bases and then ill draw them tomorrow
please forgive me. i didnt get to alouet *cries* I WILL THIS WEEK
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-09 05:54:11 +0000 UTC]
ok
you're fine don't worryyy
take your time~
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-09 05:57:42 +0000 UTC]
dont EVER tell me to take my time. you wont get it...ever lol it just wont happen XD its better if i have a timeline lol
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-09 06:02:13 +0000 UTC]
xD
then... I expect before april 30th lol
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-09 06:16:55 +0000 UTC]
XD lol
ughhh gosh. we should probably go to bed....but its probably not gonna happen lol
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-10 02:48:32 +0000 UTC]
lol my mom turned off all the lights and was like "go to bed D:<" aaand i was getting pretty tired so i went to bed. xD
and I was right, I was reallyyy tired this morning : x
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-10 04:22:31 +0000 UTC]
you looked tired at lunch. or from the little i saw of you
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-13 04:03:07 +0000 UTC]
i sorry
i was at home in pain. but ill be back tomorrow
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-13 20:17:00 +0000 UTC]
now I wasn't there xD
and then I won't be there all next week : o
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-14 16:16:01 +0000 UTC]
xD
I will~
Yeah it was raining last night : o I was going to look but I was already in bed and didn't want to get up lol
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-14 17:50:02 +0000 UTC]
there was so lightning. disappointment all up in this joint lol
lol the pictures i did of you for my project turned out to be the best. everyone loves those ones. congrats, how does that make you feel?
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-14 18:23:01 +0000 UTC]
aw xD
really? coooolll eue
make me feel... um, lol idk xD
I'm happy :3
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-14 18:49:36 +0000 UTC]
lol i turned it in to berger. i hope she likes it
ill try to make a jpeg of it monday and send it to you so that you can has it :3
hows your day going?
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-14 18:53:40 +0000 UTC]
ok ^^
My day's goin good, my mom and dad are running around to get things packed and organized for tomorrow xD
I'm attempting to draw a zombieish nurse picture lol
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rainbowsexhair In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-14 19:10:33 +0000 UTC]
lol thats cool
is the whole family going to...something con?
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wundrfool In reply to rainbowsexhair [2012-04-14 19:16:27 +0000 UTC]
nonono we're going on vacation lol
I can tell u more if u want to know but in notes >.>
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wundrfool In reply to wundrfool [2012-04-09 04:31:07 +0000 UTC]
lol didn't mean to send it yet xD
anyway,
he'd be all jealous over my awesome zune and talk about how itunes sucks and takes like 40 minutes lol
he never uses (or my mom rlly) their ipods... I could use theirs but they don't have very good music
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