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Published: 2013-07-04 01:34:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 751; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 0
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Recovering from food poisoning so I had some time on my hands today to doodle a bit!aaand this is what came out! Wapiti is Elk in French just to let everyone know who doesn't speak french
Just one of my many characters. Hmm.. maybe I should make a comic??
Anyway - thoughts & comments & questions are always welcome!
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How did u manage to sneak up on him?
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Thank you!
I can't wait to color him hahaΒ
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Woh 0.0 that's a sweet looking dragon I love the way he's posed to it basically te perfect pose for him he actually looks cute too great job it be awesome to see a colored version of this
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I'm planning on coloring him soon!Β
My tablet comes in 5 days I just ordered one
Soooo excited!Β
Thank you so much!!Β
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*in front of the spike. Whoops! 
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Hi there! Saw you asking for a critique. Well, I can't judge too much since it's lineart so I can't say anything about shading, light sources, coloring, etc. I do like this thing's design. Very neat. Looks like it's a kind of nature-themed dragon like creature? Well it sure is interesting. And yeah, man, if you have the kind of patience and willpower necessary for making comics, I think you should. Anyway, onto actual advice. First off, I'd suggest changing the hair that's in the ponytail. (Or mane, I suppose?) From the angle it's at, it looks like its defying gravity to curl to the left side like that. I know you probably wanted to show it off, however, since you wanted the creature to have it and otherwise no one could see it if it behaved according to gravity. My advice, sine I assume you do want to show it off, is to make it draped over the shoulder. That way you could show everyone it and it would adhere to gravity. So yeah, just put it before that line you drew for the shoulder. Also, you could show a bit of the spike (like on the one on the right) to show the hair is tucked behind the spike. Anyway, also with that hair, I might smooth out those bits of it where it puffs out after the hair tie so they are limp with gravity like real hair as well.Anyway! Also, I might adjust the feet a little. The front ones don't seem to be resting on the same plane. The one on the left is a bit higher up. Easy fix though! Also, do the back feet have 2 toes? If not, maybe you'd see a bit of a toe on the foot on the left? Not sure.
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wow thank you so much for taking the time to give it such a good critique!!!!! I really appreciate your time and effort to give feed back and your advice totally helps! I know what you mean about the mane, hair isn't my strong point at the moment and I've always been working on getting it to look more realistic as far as hair goes, and the weight of it. So yes, having it rest on his shoulder is a great idea! Also I didn't wanna draw his dick or anything so I just put a little scoop looking line there in place, lol. and now it ended up looking kinda funny! facepalm. I also kinda ran out of room when inking in his front paws so that's why they look kinda floaty. I should draw a straight line under the next creature I do to make sure the paws/hooves/ etc. are all on the same horizon line. Always something I forget!! As for the bumps think of the circles as tattoos, like part of his skin haha. But bumps would be cool too! I might do that with the next one!
Thank you thank you again It was amazing to hear back from someone about this piece! yay!Β
Best wishes and happy art making!Β
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Hahaha, no problem, man. That all sounds great. ^^ It was no problem at all! I enjoy helping people out when I can. ^^ Too funny. Anyway, yeah! Thanks, and good luck to you on future projects!
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Yes make a comic! this is really cool i like the way he is unique but you can still spot parts of other creatures.... love the claws and how clear he is!
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thank you so much 
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this is very nice! I love your line, it's very clean!
nice work!^^
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The lineart is SO clean! I absolutely love how you drew the tail. c:
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Awe thank you so much!!
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Oooh, I see! 
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