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Published: 2018-05-18 09:34:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 684; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 5
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I fixed a few things on the last page, I was going way too fast. XD I highlighted them here if anyone is interested, or is wondering, like wait? Didn't that read differently before? I clarified what Zhin said.Related content
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I like the changes, but then, I like the original too!
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She looked a bit too chunky there XD
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That's OK, we love her anyway!
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hahahaha. Well yeah she's still pretty cute
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AWW Thank for noticing dude 
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I demand it to be changed to "That is a nice ass!"
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You want Zhin to admire the Skeleton man's butt? XD he doesn't really have a butt- he has a bone pelvis XD
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I know that feeling you post something but when take close look you began see the mistakes and try to fix the mistakes hoping people don't notice it.
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Yes this is absolutely true, there are so many little things I want to fix, but the show must go on
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Butttttttttttttttttterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr XD
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Either of those 2 lines work XD
I see what happened there, her hair sorta blurred into her waist
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Yeah, it looked okay in the sketch, I think it's the shading and the big overcoat that she wears
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Yes, indeed it can. I hope this helped
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Good reasont to it too 
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I changed the bottom to the top one, I'll know when you see it. So now Zhin properly specifies she is "SEEING" the past, not that she is IN the past. Also her coat was making her look "fat" it's PROBABLYYYYY more accurate as it was.... this happens in real life, but, this is art so I had to "fix it". I mean if we were going accurate a horrible scary skeleton would be standing there and we'd all be like AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA lol instead of it being cute. Anyway I'm gonna stop talking here.
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