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Published: 2011-01-09 21:51:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1206; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 26
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Oh.My.God.


You don't know how proud I am of this xD!

It all started at like 8:30 pm two days ago o3o I was bored and decided to draw the cover of a random warriors book in my own style. So I did this, and BOOM, this picture happened :'D

This is the first time I've sketched a picture then scanned, traced over it, and digitally colored it, besides a long time ago when I drew a picture of Stein.

OK I'M GOING TO STOP WRITING STUFF SO I CAN POST THIS AND YOU GUYS CAN ENJOY ^^ ~

Picture (c) =RavenfeatherForever
Code of the CLans (c) Erin Hunter
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Comments: 14

mossaroo [2011-01-16 22:21:25 +0000 UTC]

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the anatomy is great. you have relly improved on that firestar looks awsome. so do the rest.

but to me it seems as though their paws are a bit too small. and the rock that they are standing on the brown lines look a bit sloopy and jagged.
also the cat heads in the back (the black ones) they look smeared.

but in otherwords... it looks awsome, the shading.. well i cant even do that good and the shadow is marvelous and i can recognize the cats in the picture e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> firestar blackstar tallstar and leopardstar.

great great great picture. absolutly fantastic e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/>

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cali-cat [2011-01-09 22:27:13 +0000 UTC]

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This Piece is great!

You've drawn the cat's anatomy very nicely,and you've captured their personalities in their expressions. It also has very nice shading. Firestar looks amazing and you did a great job with the background.

Overall you did an awesome job however, the rock(s) they are standing on look a bit odd. You may have been better off not adding those sketchy brown lines all over the side and bottom of the rock. Also the gold cat's (the cat farthest to the right) paw looks a bit sloppy compared to the other cat's paws.

In Total, this is really good. Keep up the great work!

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BeepBop139 [2011-01-15 02:10:43 +0000 UTC]

awesome XD

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Rachel-the-zarbax [2011-01-11 00:47:46 +0000 UTC]

Sweet! XD

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Keatsune [2011-01-10 02:00:03 +0000 UTC]

tallstar and firestar are drawn so perfectly.... but blackstar's muzzle looks to far down:3
great job though!!

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Darorgoi [2011-01-10 01:39:21 +0000 UTC]

I think its pretty good,but I agree with cali-cat, the rocks seem odd. I like Firestar the best. Blackstar's muzzle is a bit off and his ears are unusually small, but other than that, he's pretty good! Tallstar and Leopardstar seem to have triangle-bodies that are slightly longer than they should be. Other than that, its a cool picture.

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yay4warriorcats [2011-01-09 23:24:37 +0000 UTC]

I really like it.The only thing is that Blackstar's eye seems a tiny bit too small,and his ears are a little bit awkward.Also,as cali-cat pointed out,the rocks look a little off

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blackkittenpawz [2011-01-09 22:25:06 +0000 UTC]

Whos the orange cat behind Tallstar?

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RavenfeatherForever In reply to blackkittenpawz [2011-01-09 22:27:29 +0000 UTC]

To the right is supposed to be leopardstar though her markings came out a little too light

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blackkittenpawz In reply to RavenfeatherForever [2011-01-09 22:30:36 +0000 UTC]

Kay

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iceleaf101 [2011-01-09 21:58:50 +0000 UTC]

love it

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MEOWERZMUFFINZ [2011-01-09 21:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Amazing job! The way you drew it catches the anatomy very nicely

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RavenfeatherForever In reply to MEOWERZMUFFINZ [2011-01-09 22:00:27 +0000 UTC]

Danke :3 ~

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DyaniAnn [2011-01-09 21:54:15 +0000 UTC]

I think it's ur best work so far, it's fantastic!

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