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Published: 2005-07-26 21:04:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 5329; Favourites: 217; Downloads: 34
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Drabble. I felt inspired by a deam I had last night, so this came to be. I always thought of raves as a place where one could go to lose yourself, forget about everything, to just be free for those few hours. I've never been to a rave myslef, so this is just a fictional little piece of what I think they are, or can be. Make of this what you want.It's not the best, I know. So just tell me what you think is wrong with it and I'll try and improve. That's why I'm posting here, after all.
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That is so amazing. It's so true, and I just kinda sat there after reading it, I was so touched. Thank you for writing that and sharing it.
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The ONLY things that's wrong from my personal experience is that not everyone is dancing :/
it's actually pretty lame. haha. So not everyone goes to the beat.
But I love this so it doesn't matter. haha
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Wow. This really spoke to me deeply. I can relate to this story on many levels. Thanks for posting this!
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I like this. It truely explains rave. The story was powerful, giving me a new perspective on it, but also bringing back memories of what's been done at raves. Memories that caused pain, but some that caused happiness
I like this, keep up the good work
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i love this! it's so sad yet it shows raves as something good instead of bad. its amazing!
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I couldn't have put it better. I know I feel the same way, I go to raves to forget about the world and the stress consuming my daily life and just let go.
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Amazing. Simply. Amazing. I myself find my own escape in music. <3
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I am a raver and Yes, raves are about freedom, about music, about dancing, and about the now. I love your piece, the only thing that sorta got me was the "fake grins and giggles" Generally if their fake... you aren't at the right rave. That feeling of freedom, of letting your worrys go and just dancing, the grins are real. Raves are a place where you can be you and everyone will love you for it, everyone is one, one massive body linked to the music. again though, I love your work, makes me smile and proud to be apart of my culture and makes me sad, because this is a story for alot of people that go to raves. Thumbs up!
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luuuuuuuuuv! ^^ never been to a rave either but my friens say everyones on ecstacy X_X besides that i think youve captured it beautifully really makes me want to go!
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wow this tugs at my heartstrings. well done. it sounds amazing
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wow this tugs at my heartstrings. well done. it sounds amazing
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great work. i can relate myself to this. your a very nice writer ^_^
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I absolutely love this ^-^
I rave and, that's exactly how I feel when I go raving It's a place where you can escape from reality :]
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That just.. made my day <3
It's like everything put in the right words, AWESOME JOB ♥
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I also think you captured perfectly! Simply amazing! I live to look for literature and music that make me move, physically and spiritually. I applaud you and your work.
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<3 U srs u have never gone? It sounds rly good! Its kinda bittersweet but to the truth.
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It's wonderful. And bitter-sweetly beautiful. You got the feeling of the rave to this.Great!
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oh......my.......god....... that is so good! and u say u never rave? thts impressive preety accurate. sweet stuff ur real good
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What happened to this "girl"?
your dead on what raves are at their potential, one just has to allow that freeing stimulation to enter, now only if life could be like that on the outside.
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This captured my heart! Rave is amazing but this truely explains it. Even the most emotional of people can be swayed by music, or other forms of dance, music, or art.
Faved!
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Wow. This really does capture what to me music is in general. Being a glowstringer/glowsticker, dancing is the easiest way for me to completely lose myself and just do whatever I feel at the moment. And as some others said, those who live in the music take others in without really questioning them, so long as they share that common bond. Kudos.
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Amazing! I tried to capture the same feeling in one of my pieces, but I don't think I did so hot compared to you, XD
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sounds perfect and right on to me. But in the rave community we don't care what your story is we only care about you now. We won't ask questions and will welcome you with open arms
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i agree...i am the same way...this reminds me of the song "face down" by red jumpsuit apparatus
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Hoe.
Lee.
Shit.
x_x
This is... Probably better than Poe.
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You should have incorporated something about drugs in there, as this seems like a very serious and interesting piece of prose.
You could have added E and made it even more detailed ya know.
And it's pretty common for ravers to try out E, as the sensations it gives are simply perfect for raving.
And no I don't do drugs. lol
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I LOOOOOOOOVE IT XD *adds to faves, sorry, a bit on the drunk side tonight* xD
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Haha, thanks! (: And thanks for the fave!
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No problem, it was really good.
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o.0 wow that's cool I love how you use the raving thing
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Thank you. 
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Anytime, this kindof relates to me...In a way I guess, I'm not that bad off, but Raves are still a wonderful release for me.
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Thank you! And thanks for the fave too!
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i really loved
colorfull and sad
its a bit short but sum the story well
keep the good work
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