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Kitty-Winder [2017-09-17 19:03:35 +0000 UTC]

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wow this is really great! i think you get a new step with this draw! the position is very creative, and i like the style. i think the blood is good too, it is not exagerated. i think the rain drops are so tiny and "repetitive" and following one "line", like, it's seems that you just made a bit of rain in somewhere and used ctrl c + ctrl v in the rest of the draw. you can try to make then more longer, and a bit less on the next time. this draw could be more nice if you work more on the background, the trees dont have any "wood" texture, so it's seems just to big solid sticks. The grass tonality is good, but the cats seems to be flying over it, try to put some grass above them. the backleg of the lying cat is with human legs anatomy. cats can't bend their backlegs like this. but the legs of the cat above are very good, just a bit too thin, but it's still good. Hope my critique could help you with future draws in some way!

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waffleswaddlesAJ [2017-09-17 01:38:50 +0000 UTC]

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wOAH. I can see you really improving! It's super nice how you've done the character positions and fur tufts. It can be hard to find a stance in which both character's facial expressions both show, yet you did it wonderfully! Good choice on angles, and line art color as well. A few things such as the kitty's big tails and skinny legs can be worked on, although huge improvement has happened on these from before. Also the rain drops are too small. With just fixing up those handful of techniques, your art is surely bond to be refined because you have really nailed your impact and overall feel! Keep it up! I love this!!

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