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Published: 2004-11-05 18:04:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 104; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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everything starts goodeverything is rhythmic
until,i make mistake
it happens all the time
i never learn from the past
everything starts good
until,iam in mood
i prepare well
for the game iam into
but i always fail
and my game lasts too
somthing inside me
pulls me down
i dont have a float
so i get drowned
my mistakes lasts
all the time
i think of throwing it
all the time
they say
what goesback comes back
its true with me
for all my game
believe in him
they say
to how many is he gonna listen
you say
someone
pull the shit out of me
i will be great
if you do it for me
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"believe in him
they say
to how many is he gonna listen
you say"
I say........He'll listen to everyone!!!
You just try it out na......try seeking out help........
Ask him to do it for you......n then....
just sit back and see the miracle happen!!!
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hahaha...r u a Philosopher ?
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hahaha...r u a Philosopher ?
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Hmmm.......I really donno!
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um ok now its fixed...wierd...sry for mutiple post
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err....This commented on the wrong poem.I actually submitted it to "mistakes".lol
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