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RemnantXao — Kosuke Matamori -Exiled Heir
Published: 2009-11-09 03:11:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 705; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 23
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MY friends OC.And our stories protagonist (along with Yasu and Zairene)
He's raised and trained by Zairene as a child.
EDIT: tried adding more detail to hand positioning (thumbs) and the angle to the left blade so hopefully it looks a little better than before ^_^'
Extra Edit: More tweaking: Switched blade positioning. Even went through the motions to find out what would be more efficient
. His style IS supposed to me a bit unorthodox, however he probablly wouldnt last long like the way i had him before. I do like the help ^_^...kinda wish I'd do some streaming sometime. Dont have the funds or time for it...yet
Hopefully it dosent show every change Ive made, sry if its annoying anyone
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That's very nice perspective! :0 on the right hand.
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lol yea. I was trying to make it look dynamic since I was too lazy for a background ^_^'
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I THINK that the right hand is correctly positioned but the sword should be held on the opposite direction in order to be efficient for the attack-Not: ( but rather: ) Or the concavity of the sword to the right(instead of the left) if this is better expressed so.
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Thanks. I always tend to tweak my drawings.
So HIS left hand would hold the blade in the opposite direction (pointing in the same direction as his sheaths) OR he'd hold the blade with his palm facing up.
And his right blade's edge would be pointed inward to his face, instead of to the left?
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Yes, this is how it has to be. This kind of thing happens all the time while writing also, you know. When I give my stories to people they often notice repetitions or inconsistencies that I have missed even after two or three lectures.
It does not mean anything else apart from the fact that while you concentrate to draw - or write - on the excitement you may miss a few details.
Your work is excellent and you are gifted. Looking forward to seeing more of your illustrations!
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Very nice work! In general, I prefer not to do comments on a technical point of view as I am not drawing. Here, however, I think that GELAE is right: The LEFT hand should hold the sword on the other sense if you want to get it right (I am not sure about the right hand either.)
If you want to be sure, why don' t you try to take whatever you have available (a knife for instance) and try to hold it as if you wanted to attack an opponent? I believe that if you want to be efficient, the sword on the left hand hold in this way in an attack position is not correct. It is not the back of the hand that ought to be visible but the opposite side (folded fingers-side of the palm.)
But the illustration is very nice and the movement is great!
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Not a good way to be holding the left handed blade there but eh :-p
Your pics are always so actiony ^-^
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thanks ^_^
Do you mean the way the blade is positioned, or the way he's holding it?
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Both, actually :-p That position might better work for a block, it which case you would wan to have the blunt edge (or better yet, the flat part) towards his opponent's incoming attack.
You could have it be more like the weapon in his right hand, that would make more sense. Or choose a different position for it, like its sweeping from right to left, which could serve as a great block. Its not that bad of a position, just awkward.
And now that I'm looking at it, the right hand itself doesn't look right. *squints* I think its the thumb. It needs to be on the other side for it to make sense ^-^
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*grabs swords*
its slashin' time >_<
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*Pulls out two Ninjatos*Hyaa!!! lol
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