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alicia-draws [2014-03-23 17:28:18 +0000 UTC]
Here is my take on the drawing:
First of all, I loved the way you executed your smooth shading technique like you did in all of your work. I have seen them - You did an excellent job!
A couple of problems I have with this drawing though is that the white spots are a bit random such as the ones on the jeans and snowman's body. I am not sure if they represent the lights or falling snowflakes, but that was my issue on it. Also, I think the shading of the coat worn by the girl on the very right is kinda iffy to me. While I thought your light source was well defined on the very left, I do not really see it on the right. I realize that you were suggesting the coat is a light color. I just thought it was a little random to me.
I hope I am of some help because I am not exactly good at critiquing - I am not trying to offend you or anything, I just wanted to address a few things that I thought you had issues with.
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reniervivas666 In reply to alicia-draws [2014-03-23 18:09:52 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the comment, i use shade from an original picture reference. i don't speak too much english
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alicia-draws In reply to reniervivas666 [2014-03-23 18:12:22 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. Oh, it was referenced? Ah, okay then. I have never seen the anime before, that was why I was questioning some of the shading.
I'm sorry about that. It's fine.
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alicia-draws In reply to alicia-draws [2014-03-23 17:36:59 +0000 UTC]
I hope I really do not sound too stupid there. I sound like I was nitpicking there a bit...
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JeshuaMorbus [2013-12-19 13:32:18 +0000 UTC]
¿Es ésta la calle LOL? XD
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