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Published: 2008-05-28 04:28:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 8041; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 26
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Read Chapter I The Necklace here-[link]
Read Chapter II The Notice here-
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Read Chapter III The Mission here-
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Read Chaptern IV The Reunion here-
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Why do I get the feeling this is all gonna go horribly wrong?
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I always thought Sasuke and Sai looked alike..
sakura can Never replace Sasuke... Heh.
Aww.. Sasuke is so Frigging cute ;']
You can so tell that his charecter wouldn't show his jealously but you know it would be inside of him
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haha !! lol looser!! ^^ hahaha yeah!! LOOOOOSER ^^ lol nice little notes!! keep them on!
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xDDD
I love your little notes on the side xDDD
they are funny *laugh*
But to be honest - I have to concentrate a lot, to not losing control over my self and become a screaming fan girl ^^Β°
That Douji is great!
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quit mo-ping around sasuke, she still wants you u kno XD
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XD "loser"
...sasusaku...im not giving up on that pairing yet! *_*
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Lol, loser. Your side notes are funny to read. XD
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OMG your commics(doujinshis) are very professional 
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Please more!
I really want to see if Sasuke's gonna talk to Sakura about Sai and things like that!
Maby say how he got Narutos neckles (sp?)!
And like always...Beautyful work!
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It looks like Sai and Sakura are holding hands. And right in front of Sasuke too. Haha.
Poor Uchiha. He'll just need to win Sakura back.
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OH their holding hands lol. poor Sasuke... loser LOL
The Hokage's hand/arm in 5th panel looks a bit funny. Maybe draw like lines and another arm to show a bit of movement when his calling them over (is he calling them over with his arm? i don't really know lol)...
Although Sasuke's expression and chicken hair butt is looking good
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I just wanted it to be ooovvvvvvvveeerrrrr
it's good that you caught that I never get much critique even when I ask for it, so I'll keep in mind to try and do more transition panels and not rush things as much
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OHHHHHH sasuke looks upset! lol great page I can't wait for more!
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jojojojojojo, sasuke se lo merecia! loooooooser xDDD
Please, siguiente pagina >_π: 0 β©: 1
no hablo espaΓ±ol @_@
bien
que es merecia?
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Oh, sorry! I forget it, but, my english is bad too.
"Merecia" is deserve, I think! Mmmhh....
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lol loser xD aww he's looking so sad watching Sakura and Sai holding hands xD'
Yay Shikamaru! Tell off the glasses-man haha!
>< Sakura should stop dating the penis-obsessed, Sasuke cosplaying Sai-Guy xD
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=O HOW COULD YOU!? You called Sasuke a looser O_O
but other than that... THIS IS BRILL!!! I LOVE IT!!! ^_^
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Aww, you wrote loser D:
LOL.
That's so cute XD
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XDDDDD I just saw that too...
and <.< was about to comment it...
beat me to it
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Heck Yeah!! Whats sasuke thinking 'bout that! Take it and swallow it Uchiha!! Hahaha he sometimes deserve to sufer a little but I love him!
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oooooo...
I wonder what sasuke's thinking when he sees them holding hands...?
great job!!
can't wait for the next one
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