Comments: 11
StephOBrien [2019-01-04 14:26:00 +0000 UTC]
Very striking! You captured his expression and body language perfectly - I like how you used the droop of his petals to show him shrinking away from the threat.
I normally wouldn't recommend the color you used to shadow the petals, but for this picture, it works really well by giving it a slightly surreal, unnatural look that makes it all the more ominous.
In the description, you mentioned that you aren't sure if the shading is all right. I think it looks pretty good; the only two weaknesses I noticed are that the shadows on the petals are way darker than the shadow on the stem, and the light direction seems inconsistent. I hope those observations help! Despite those two factors, the picture still looks great.
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Rethza In reply to StephOBrien [2019-01-04 14:49:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank You so much for the advices, they're very helpful for me! I am glad you still like it.
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StephOBrien In reply to Rethza [2019-01-04 22:55:38 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
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Sky-Kaiser [2018-11-28 00:59:09 +0000 UTC]
EVIL FRISK: You BETRAYED me.
FLOWEY: N-No! I never betrayed you! I was... I was distracting him so you could finish him off! I'd never betray you, Chara! You're my best friend!
EVIL FRISK: You also stole my kill.
FLOWEY: But... but... no! No no no no no! I didn't mean it! I just wanted to help!
EVIL FRISK: By destroying his Soul? I was going to the Surface with that.
FLOWEY: I'm sorry! I swear, I didn't mean it! I... I was doing it to make sure he... uh... stayed dead! I'd never even think of standing in your way! At least, not intentionally!
EVIL FRISK: Don't lie to me. Your dishonesty is all over your little petaled face. You did this to stop me from getting to the Surface. You're scared of me, so you tried to get that old goat fool to stop me. And frankly... I don't see any reason to have you around anymore. (draws Real Knife)
FLOWEY: Please, Chara, you don't really mean all this, do you? (changes face to resemble Asriel) I mean, it's me! Asriel! Your best friend! I'm sorry! I didn't mean any of it! You just scared me, is all! We can be partners, still! You don't have to just off me! (voices begins sounding more like Asriel) I promise, I won't get in your way like this again! (Evil Frisk starts advancing on Flowey.) I can help! I can... I can -- URK!
(Evil Frisk is grabbing Flowey by the stem, Real Knife raised.)
FLOWEY (in Asriel's voice, crying in fear): Please... don't... kill... me...!
(Gory Discretion Shot as Evil Frisk brutally murders Flowey anyway.)
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Rethza In reply to Sky-Kaiser [2018-11-28 14:23:20 +0000 UTC]
This is so sad... (but very good written)
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Sky-Kaiser In reply to Rethza [2018-11-28 17:35:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
Of course, I've never done Genocide (I've only watched it). And frankly, I don't want to.
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Rethza In reply to Sky-Kaiser [2018-11-28 18:54:50 +0000 UTC]
I also didn't do genocide... I don't want to kill Asriel.......or Papyrus.
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Sky-Kaiser In reply to Rethza [2018-11-29 02:43:32 +0000 UTC]
Actually, I DID kill Flowey once, but at the end of the Neutral Pacifist Route. I did it to avenge Asgore, though.
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Myuutsuu85 [2018-11-11 16:41:41 +0000 UTC]
Beautifuly drawn.
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ZeroVant [2018-10-02 22:29:29 +0000 UTC]
aw poor flower
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