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revois — Ms Peacock by-nc-nd

Published: 2010-07-12 22:26:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 464; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 26
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Description A couple hours trying out a new style...tell me if you guys like it or not, I'm still undecided.
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Comments: 10

raybearr [2010-08-04 22:22:50 +0000 UTC]

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This is gorgeous. I really like the background.
You did an excellent job of creating the movement of the dress. The colors work well, and I like the detail in the peacock feathers.
I only have a couple problems with this image. The first is that the shadowing on the nose is a little off. If you were to remove it, the face would look much smoother and match the correct shading of the rest of the body.
I also don't really like the faint pattern in the dress. It looks a bit "stamped on", and doesn't match the natural feel of the rest of the image.
Otherwise, great job! This is very interesting and eye-catching.
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revois In reply to raybearr [2010-08-05 01:23:42 +0000 UTC]

I see..I added the pattern because the the dress seemed almost plain left alone. But I see your point, and I'm glad for the critique!

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WrittenStar [2010-07-13 17:20:04 +0000 UTC]

I like it.

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revois In reply to WrittenStar [2010-07-13 17:21:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, me too.

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WrittenStar In reply to revois [2010-07-13 17:22:46 +0000 UTC]

Good. Everyone should like their work.

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revois In reply to WrittenStar [2010-07-13 17:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Haha I'm proud to say that most of my stuff I do...speaking of things I like, you haven't uploaded in quite some time!

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WrittenStar In reply to revois [2010-07-13 17:33:47 +0000 UTC]

Yea.....I've been practicing, but those are more of sketch dumps.

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revois In reply to WrittenStar [2010-07-13 17:38:34 +0000 UTC]

Haha that's okay, just submit something! You can always take it offline later, I just like to see how you're coming along

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WrittenStar In reply to revois [2010-07-13 17:45:12 +0000 UTC]

I'll try to finish something soon.

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revois In reply to WrittenStar [2010-07-13 17:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Kay good!

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