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rhyan — at a snail's pace
Published: 2006-02-04 18:25:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 926; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 17
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Description in a rush
i grab a spoon
and eat my cereal
it tastes good
but something's wrong
my throat burns
the spoon has bleach on it
i forgot to rinse it
i must remember not to pee in my mouth
i could die
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Comments: 36

kit--kat [2006-08-26 04:22:33 +0000 UTC]

cute, no really!!!

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sexualnintendo [2006-05-22 05:10:53 +0000 UTC]

i write poems like that and get ridiculed... why.... why!?

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rhyan In reply to sexualnintendo [2006-06-03 13:19:34 +0000 UTC]

I dunno. The suppose viewing public can be fickle sometimes.

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mercipor [2006-03-13 19:30:53 +0000 UTC]

i like it
its mine now
and you cant stop that

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passenger-nq [2006-02-05 16:45:39 +0000 UTC]

not what i expected after reading the title, but very funny poem

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rhyan In reply to passenger-nq [2006-02-05 17:44:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Matt.

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passenger-nq In reply to rhyan [2006-02-05 22:43:42 +0000 UTC]

anytime. btw, it's been ages, how've you been?

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rhyan In reply to passenger-nq [2006-02-05 23:25:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it's been too long.

I haven't been too bad. Had some ups and downs, but things are turning for the better. How've you been?

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passenger-nq In reply to rhyan [2006-02-06 10:18:39 +0000 UTC]

quite the same. can't complain. got a new car, a good job, good stuff to study, all i'd need is a good girlfriend

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rhyan In reply to passenger-nq [2006-02-14 07:23:53 +0000 UTC]

a good girlfriend would be nice

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passenger-nq In reply to rhyan [2006-02-14 08:05:41 +0000 UTC]

yep, been a while

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AngelsDevils15 [2006-02-05 08:58:05 +0000 UTC]

O_o'

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rhyan In reply to AngelsDevils15 [2006-02-05 18:17:41 +0000 UTC]

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AngelsDevils15 In reply to rhyan [2006-02-06 02:38:04 +0000 UTC]

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AngelsDevils15 In reply to AngelsDevils15 [2006-02-06 04:14:57 +0000 UTC]

i get a cookie!!??

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rhyan In reply to AngelsDevils15 [2006-02-06 04:13:53 +0000 UTC]

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hottgermanchick [2006-02-05 06:15:58 +0000 UTC]

and you people call me blonde

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rhyan In reply to hottgermanchick [2006-02-05 06:21:12 +0000 UTC]

I haven't once called you that.

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hottgermanchick In reply to rhyan [2006-02-05 06:30:35 +0000 UTC]

joke

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rhyan In reply to hottgermanchick [2006-02-05 07:55:02 +0000 UTC]

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ladyr [2006-02-04 18:34:51 +0000 UTC]



I knew I should have been scared.
<3

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rhyan In reply to ladyr [2006-02-04 21:00:31 +0000 UTC]

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ladyr In reply to rhyan [2006-02-05 14:47:20 +0000 UTC]

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rhyan In reply to ladyr [2006-02-05 18:16:07 +0000 UTC]

everything will be alright
how was your breakfast this morning?

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ladyr In reply to rhyan [2006-02-05 18:31:01 +0000 UTC]

Toast and applesauce rofl
after an hour at the gym watching Sister Act XD
it was delicious and yours?

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rhyan In reply to ladyr [2006-02-05 21:25:04 +0000 UTC]

I had toast with butter and peanut butter and orange juice

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ladyr In reply to rhyan [2006-02-06 07:10:04 +0000 UTC]

I toasted my bread in the oven cause we don't have a toaster.

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rhyan In reply to ladyr [2006-02-06 07:55:21 +0000 UTC]

I've tried making grilled cheese sandwiches like that... but it just dried out the bread

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ladyr In reply to rhyan [2006-02-06 16:34:53 +0000 UTC]

haha.. yeah you can't really bake a grilled cheese sandwich that's why its called "grilled".

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rhyan In reply to ladyr [2006-02-06 21:57:09 +0000 UTC]

I know.. but i thought the broiler may work. It didn't.

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ladyr In reply to rhyan [2006-02-06 22:43:52 +0000 UTC]

silly.

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rhyan In reply to ladyr [2006-02-07 00:01:00 +0000 UTC]

I'll never do it again.

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ladyr In reply to rhyan [2006-02-07 03:29:27 +0000 UTC]

rofl. And now I will not try it.

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rhyan In reply to ladyr [2006-02-07 03:32:56 +0000 UTC]

good.. I'm glad someone can learn from my mistakes

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ladyr In reply to rhyan [2006-02-07 17:36:43 +0000 UTC]

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rhyan In reply to ladyr [2006-02-07 18:59:36 +0000 UTC]

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