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Published: 2019-01-22 08:20:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 2031; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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This is ghoulissh 's Wastelander Kristen.I love her design so much so I drew her. owo
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Hello, I'm from Project Comment.
I'll start with what's good. You seem to be able to draw poses well enough, and you are clearly familiar with drawing hair and facial expressions. Your anatomy is mostly accurate, and you know where to place your shadows. Some of the things you could improve on are things like lighting, skin, texture, proportions in some areas, the blood, and your background. Your lighting looks slightly artificial. Not only are certain parts of the skin much brighter than other parts, but those highlights are located in places they should not, given the position of the sun. The character's neck looks much too clean-looking compared to the rest of her body, and the piece, in general, doesn't have a large variety of textures. The face is a bit too small for the character's head size, and her leg seems disjointed from her hip. As for the background, try changing the colors of the sun to look a little more natural, and either blur the entire background or don't blur it at all. The ground is blurred, while the sky is not. It's important to make sure that different parts of your background are consistent with one another. Apart from that, work on eventually eliminating the use or need for line-art, if your goal is to be realistic. I hope this helped.
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Hello From ProjectComment
What I like about your art:
I love the details to the hair. I like the pose.I like the color. The background looks good.Love the dirty look and feel of the character. The nose and lips look good
What I think you need to improve on: what is that on her neck? It looks like she got decapitated. The face looks a bit small, maybe enlarging it a bit so the forehead doesn’t look so big. Here is a google link to a reference i thought might help. images.app.goo.gl/JGHd5ommHf6E…
Here is a prinerest reference for cuts. You do need an account to view it sadly.
www.pinterest.com/pin/35803623…
I do think you should try making a logo instead of using the deviantart watermark. That way you can place it properly so it’s not taking over the image.
I did say i liked your background but maybe try doing the sun in different colors, instead of just a ball of overpowering white.
I also think you should work on blood stains.
Here’s a google image i found that may help. images.app.goo.gl/i96KiW71TuUX…
Last thing, It feels like you drew this traditionally because it looks flat. Maybe try drawing this while looking at the traditional image? Also maybe try the pencil brush for shading, the air brush for blush? I found that works pretty well. You don’t have to take my advice i just wanted to help.
All in all i like your art and hope to see improvement in the future. Good luck 
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