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riku92238 — Can You Feel It?
Published: 2008-01-17 01:12:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 127; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description Can you feel it?
Feel what you have done?
Feel the insanity running through?
Can you feel it?

Can you see it?
See what you have made?
See what you have destroyed?
Can you see it?

Can you hear it?
Hear the wails of the children?
Hear the crys and screams of the people?
Can you hear it?

Can you feel it?
Can you see it?
Can you hear it?

Yes.
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Comments: 10

TheForestSage [2008-01-17 04:48:55 +0000 UTC]

Wow I really liked that Adri! You are the Mistress of Poetry! Can't wait for the next!!! You make the best poems!!

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riku92238 In reply to TheForestSage [2008-01-17 05:45:31 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you my darling!
I feel great. Everyone likes my poetry...
^_^

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TheForestSage In reply to riku92238 [2008-01-17 05:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome Adri! Of course your poetry's the best!
I enjoy it everytime!

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StellasStar [2008-01-17 04:22:48 +0000 UTC]

I remember that!
I LOOOVE it!

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riku92238 In reply to StellasStar [2008-01-17 05:45:45 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou! ^_^

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dragondreamzero [2008-01-17 01:17:58 +0000 UTC]

wow. that is really captivating beyond words.

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riku92238 In reply to dragondreamzero [2008-01-17 01:29:35 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you. ^_^
It's a good feeling to have others give positive comments on my work. Some of the people whom I showed it to, they said it made no sense but [link] , Star was like, "Am I the only one who likes it?"

^_^

Anyway, my point is, thanks.

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dragondreamzero In reply to riku92238 [2008-01-17 03:01:28 +0000 UTC]

true to that. i like to read more of your work.

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riku92238 In reply to dragondreamzero [2008-01-17 05:46:06 +0000 UTC]

take a look at my gallery^_^

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dragondreamzero In reply to riku92238 [2008-01-17 05:57:44 +0000 UTC]

alright. thanks!

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