X-emo-sexual-X [2010-02-21 00:23:57 +0000 UTC]
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Very nice lineart! I can see you've improved.All I can think to offer in the way of improvement is that you should work on more solid shading. Your choice of colors works out well, and it's all laid out nicely, but I don't think that such vivid colors should be drawn in so lightly. Let the colors stand out a little more! It'll add some strength to the picture and really make it stand out.I like the style you picked: the outfit, the pose, the expression. I think that the smaller background should be enlarged; this, too, will give your picture a little more impact by cutting out that empty white space.All in all you seem to be doing very well, I hope you keep up the good work! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin) - "/>
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Rin-shi In reply to X-emo-sexual-X [2010-02-21 14:04:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you :3I'll try to do better next time
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PhoebeRose [2010-03-05 15:09:52 +0000 UTC]
i am so jealous of your drawing skills D;i cant draw worth shit with pencils T^Tshe is sooo cute ^^ i love her hair && dem cute bears in her pigtails ^^
Rin-shi In reply to PhoebeRose [2010-03-05 15:46:46 +0000 UTC]
aww. You just have to practice D:Thank you
CoaCoaIcing [2010-02-20 23:50:10 +0000 UTC]
D'aaaawww, how pretty and cute!!! >w< Great work, my friend!! <333
Rin-shi In reply to CoaCoaIcing [2010-02-21 14:02:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!! n__n