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Published: 2005-09-08 16:10:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 2218; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 526
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READ RIGHT TO LEFTMedia: Micron Pen 02 and 03, Adobe Photoshop CS
Time: .... to long
The very first page of the doujinshi. >^^< Yea I know it is a bit dark. But I had no idea how to make it look like it is at night other then that. Please. If the tones do suck I know. I am new at this and I am still learning but if you have any tips I am all ears.
By the third page you will understand what Roy is talking about. But I dont know if I will be posting that page after I get page 2 up. Depends on what people are saying and how well it is coming out.
Edo and Roy (c) Square-Enix
Art and Story (c) Me
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I think #3 comic page has the best Ed's eyes. I like this so far.
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Aww. Poor Edo. Can't wait to see him going home with Roy. -looks at the Edo and Roy plushies about to attack- Did I say that out loud? ^.^ Oops...-gets attacked-
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Wow! ^_^ That's very cool. The tones and everything look awesome. These are really going to sell!
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You're very welcome. Where are you selling the doujin? (I had to ask, sorry if it's already been answered.)
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It will be sold at what ever cons I go to. The first one *hopefuly will be done by then* will be this spring at Kosaikon at Villinoa University. *goes back to working on adding the tones to page 2 and finishing page 3 to be scanned*
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omg, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE post all of it! I wanna read so badly! This is awesome! ^^ Amazing job with the tones! ^^
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I am sorry but I am going to stick with what I will be doing. I will not post all of it for no one will buy it then. I am sorry.
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Aw. T.T How are you going to be selling it? ....can I buy a copy when you finish? I'd buy a copy even if you posted it all, because you are awesome ^^
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Well I will be priting them threw CafePress and people can get them then off of me at cons. I will sell them some over the net but I really want to keep them to cons. I'll think something up when I get it done ok.
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'k then.....are you going to be at ACen? **has no clue where you live, sorry 
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I am not going to another major big con for about 2 years. I will be going to Kosaikon at Villinova University. this year in the spring though. To give you an idea I live about 40 miles north-east of Philly. Where is ACen anyway?
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It's in Rosemont, Illinois, about 45 minutes from Chicago. About half an hour from where I live. (in the opposite direction from chicago) It's the only anime con I can get to every year, since it's the closest, and hotels are not an issue.
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EEEEEE!!!!! i'm excited now.... CONTINUE!!!!!!!!, please T.T *big shuney eyes*
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ACK!! Poor Ed! Continue writing!!!! ..... Drawing!!!!
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ACK!! Poor Ed! Continue writing!!!! ..... Drawing!!!!
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.o. the toning si really good! It looks just like a real manga!
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X3 This looks so good 
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Hmmm..I actually have a critique point. There doesn't seem to be much of a mood so Edward crying doesn't get to me. Perhaps if you'd added more panels leading up to when they talk, it would have more of an impact, such as the walking through the rain, getting up to Ed, and the the first word Roy says "Fullmetal?" at the very bottom of this page. Seems a bit too rushed.
Other than that, it looks very nice.
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This is also part of Edo's memory. I know I am going to give this away. But he passes out after seeing Roy. The next few pages there will be more talking and such between the two of them. But I may add another page before this of just Roy walking down the road from work or something.
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Alright. I'll wait for the next page then, to see what happens.
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ooooooooooooooooooooooooo!! comic. you will make another, yes?
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Well ya. This is page one in a RoyxEdo Doujinshi.
I will only be posting a few pages for I will be selling this.
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ooooo..i see. that will be most interesting. your style for it is just perfect.
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XD I warn you. Will be very heated later on... that is if I can >^^<;;;
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When I saw Ed crying in the last panal it was sad. But overall its a great job and I think that the screen tones came out all right. Now I can't wait for the next pages.
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>^^< Yea he is crying. Not something you see from him often. But Roy will make it all better. X3 I needed some idea in how Roy will get him to go home with him. XD
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That is so true! Yep and I can't wait to see the rest. I'm really excited now! =^-^=
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