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Rockafiller — AaTR : Round 1 vs. Silvacho 01
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Published: 2013-06-01 09:50:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1243; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Interesting round. Pretty well paced, and fun to read. For mostly consisting of action and fighting, you slip in some nice characterization through the use of simple visuals. I must say, I quite like it. Good luck~!
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aaa thanks so much!! pacing was my biggest worry in this.. i mean it could've gone better but oh well
i think it's still okay
aaaaa thanks so much for reading ;v;
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OHMYGOD You poor dear! ;A; HOLD ON FOR YOUR LIFE, DON'T LET GO
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I'LL MAKE IT SOMEHOW KAJSDHKA
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