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morris474 [2022-10-16 07:06:11 +0000 UTC]
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Mgundam1 [2021-09-10 07:46:51 +0000 UTC]
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dangerfan [2019-07-08 02:48:51 +0000 UTC]
I love the girls' shoes!
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SteLetto [2018-11-23 10:30:27 +0000 UTC]
Imagine these girls playing a game. Two teams. Each team has 3 members. One girl from each team is blindfolded. The blindfold girls each stand on a mat. The mat has a small electric current running around its edge. This stops tiny men from escaping. The girls compete to see whose blindfolded player can squish all her tiny men first. The team mates who can see guide the player who can't.
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SteLetto In reply to Rometheus [2018-11-23 12:28:16 +0000 UTC]
I love your work and I was sure it would fit your fantasy world. I look forward to seeing the end result.
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irvingb [2018-11-14 01:23:00 +0000 UTC]
I wonder if the 'witch' thing really happened at all. Maybe this was a traditional joke that's played on stupid boys when one of their male relatives is taken away to serve a more useful role in the society, like being part of the small army of males whose entire existences are dedicated to caring for some Woman's 12,000-pair shoe collection.
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1slyfox2u [2018-10-05 16:31:24 +0000 UTC]
I love it.Β It is so cruel and creative!
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sososte [2018-10-02 19:11:59 +0000 UTC]
love itΒ
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Rometheus In reply to sososte [2018-10-06 05:49:31 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
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JasonMasters [2018-10-02 12:53:36 +0000 UTC]
Plot twist: Killing him breaks the spell and he returns to normal, except he's now squashed, and squashing a person is murder even in this universe...
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Rometheus In reply to JasonMasters [2018-10-02 13:11:36 +0000 UTC]
But judge of the court, Miss. Isabella Wiliams decided that girls was unaware of this and they step on bug like every girl would do. Timmy was found guilty of bringing his dad sized bug to school and therefore bringing to his death. He was sentenced to 28 years in forced labour quarry.
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JasonMasters In reply to Rometheus [2018-10-02 13:15:21 +0000 UTC]
As you wish.Β It's your story universe, after all.
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HerWillingVictim [2018-10-02 11:34:00 +0000 UTC]
Miss Cynthia is smiling as the 'bug' is crushed.Β She is happy to see that the girls have developed a proper attitude towards males, considering them of no importance.Β What would make the scene complete, is to have Samantha's girlfriend, reward Samantha by embracing her and kissing her deeply, all under the approving eye of Miss Cynthia.Β Miss Cynthia reminds the girls that Timmy's punishment is not over and directs them to the cabinet in the classroom, that holds the disciplinary instruments.Β "As a reward for bring Timmy's misdeeds to my attention, you girls may complete Timmy's punishment, while I step out to the teacher's lounge, for a cup of coffee."Β As she leaves, she notes that both girls are holding electric cattle prods and appear to be very excited.
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Rometheus In reply to HerWillingVictim [2018-10-02 13:07:01 +0000 UTC]
Poor Timmy is fighting from girls cattle prods from cage, but it cant much resist since limited movement and from two sides. Girls are poking him from each side of cage so he doesnt have much chance of fighting back...
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coppola76 [2018-10-02 08:54:37 +0000 UTC]
very evil girl... I love her!
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Rometheus In reply to coppola76 [2018-10-02 11:21:48 +0000 UTC]
Schoolgirls can be really cruel and evil...
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Mgundam1 In reply to coppola76 [2018-10-02 10:45:33 +0000 UTC]
This is excellent. Love Miss Cynthia crossing Her legs and looking beautiful. Especially love Her smile as Samantha does what She should do and steps on the bug. The other girl with Her arms crossed will soon step on a bug one day. The boy is getting a fair punishment for bringing the bug to school. He should address his teacher as Ms. Cynthia and answer Her with Yes Ma'am to show respect.
More of these story ideas please.
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Rometheus In reply to Mgundam1 [2018-10-02 13:03:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Miss Cynthia will order Timmy to clean Samantha shoe from blood of his bug sized squashed dad. This is also form of punishment for bringing bugs to school.
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LadyNadja In reply to Rometheus [2018-10-04 15:28:02 +0000 UTC]
Miss Cynthia's smile is so beautiful. We can sense -- and begin to share -- the pleasure She is feeling.
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Rometheus In reply to slavetto [2018-10-02 11:23:10 +0000 UTC]
Deadly combination....authority and power of teacher with evilness and cruelty of schoolgirls....
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