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Here is a commission I did for . Please read a snippet of his story below that goes with this drawing:
"Kristen closed her eyes as she moaned, drool spilling out from her forcefully opened lips. Her jaw ached from the unnaturally wide position the metal ring behind her teeth forced her to maintain. She could feel her wet spittle slipping down to land on her bare, heaving breasts. Her shoulders ached from the effort of keeping her arms lifted behind her. A thick sheath of leather encased them, forcing them to press tightly together. She wanted desperately to lower her arms, but she had quickly learned that any failure to keep them lifted caused the tight ropes around her slender throat to bite in more fiercely, cutting off what little air supply she could find.
The torment to her upper body, however, could not hold a candle to what she was experiencing down below. She balanced precariously on her right foot, toes pressed desperately into the floor to hold herself up as much as she could. Her other foot was lifted above her waist, held up by a rope tied to the thick leather cuff locked in place on her ankle. Running through a pulley system set in the ceiling above her, the rope was connected to a matching cuff on her other ankle, ensuring that she could only reach the floor with one foot at a time.
A choking sob escaped her lips, firm breasts heaving, as Kristen felt the wicked device that stood between her spread legs begin to increase in intensity. On its left, it lay dormant, rubber tubes hanging flaccid. But on its right, the matching tubes there were a blur of motion. They spun quickly, and the sound of them slapping against her extended thigh filled the room. As the brutal assault grew more rapid, Kristen knew that she would have to switch sides soon, but she dreaded the thought of what that would entail.
If the rope connecting her ankles only passed through the pulleys above, it would still have been a challenge to switch feet. Lifting one to bring the other down required her to spend at least a few moments supported only by the ropes around her neck and connected to her arms. An icy chill ran down her spine at the memory of the way the rope would tighten around her throat, of the way her lungs had shuddered in their desperate search for oxygen. The thought of experiencing that once more was terrifying, but she could feel her leg beginning to give out, thigh muscles quivering.
The rope connecting her ankles did not only pass through the pulleys above, however. It had also been passed between her legs. Her sheer white pantyhose, the only clothing she still wore, did nothing to protect her from the press of the rough rope threaded through her nether lips and up between the globes of her ass behind her. A line of thick knots tied in that rope pressed against her belly, and she shuddered at the memory of them passing so roughly between her legs.
Kristen let out a desperate mewling sound as a tremor ran through her right leg and she faltered for a moment. She fell down against the ropes on her throat and between her legs. Hot tears welled in her eyes as she pushed herself back up, but she could tell that her strength was not going to last. She had to make the change. Panting hard through flared nostrils, she braced herself for the coming torment. She took little solace in the knowledge that the flogger would start slowly on the other side.
She had to find a way out of this. She would not be able to take much more. Taking a deep breath, she thrust her left leg down, plunging into the tight clutches of the ropes."
Please let me and know what you think. Enjoy!
—Rook
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Rook-07 In reply to ??? [2022-11-19 19:01:07 +0000 UTC]
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luc2o [2019-12-02 17:06:10 +0000 UTC]
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Rook-07 In reply to luc2o [2019-12-06 13:29:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
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AllTheStawf [2018-09-05 17:24:41 +0000 UTC]
She needs to close that nasty mouth
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Rook-07 In reply to jarvik2009 [2018-03-24 01:43:47 +0000 UTC]
We’ll, she’s got no choice but to try and figure it out.
Thank you! You honor me with such praise!
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Ravinb [2018-02-22 12:48:29 +0000 UTC]
Another inventive work. You have a great talent for both the art and the story behind it.
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Rook-07 In reply to Ravinb [2018-02-28 04:04:35 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I appreciate the comment.
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Rook-07 In reply to devduck01 [2018-02-06 22:39:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. It really came together.
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Thalarionyr [2018-01-31 23:15:09 +0000 UTC]
I think both parts (graphic and written) work nicely. Good work!
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Rook-07 In reply to Thalarionyr [2018-01-31 23:42:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Thalarionyr. I'm glad you liked both parts. It's good to know people read instead of just look at the picture and move on.
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Thalarionyr In reply to Rook-07 [2018-02-01 01:02:42 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, but sadly that's what most people do, not knowing that the description can provide a lot more clarity to the depicted situation (or even give it a different turn).
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WillFish14 [2018-01-30 13:47:11 +0000 UTC]
Clever.
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Rook-07 In reply to ugiel [2018-01-31 23:41:50 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
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experimenter73 In reply to ugiel [2018-01-30 13:21:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm looking forward to getting this story finished and posted!
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denkira7 [2018-01-29 00:39:37 +0000 UTC]
What a mean predicament. Great job both of you!
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Rook-07 In reply to denkira7 [2018-01-31 23:41:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
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Rook-07 In reply to vladen13 [2018-01-31 23:41:11 +0000 UTC]
I know what you mean. I definitely wouldn't want to be in her shoes.
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cordame [2018-01-26 22:18:17 +0000 UTC]
Love the topless, love the position, love the crotchrope...one of the best imagination !
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iceman13 [2018-01-26 20:16:01 +0000 UTC]
Great story and even greater art. However, I do hope that there is someone watching that plans on giving the poor girl a break at some point...
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Rook-07 In reply to iceman13 [2018-01-31 23:39:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. You know, I don't know. We'll just have to read the story.
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experimenter73 [2018-01-26 12:12:56 +0000 UTC]
I mentioned this in private, of course, but I'll just say it again here. I love how this came out! It can be a really fun experience working on a commission with an artist, and good ones work really hard to make sure that they capture exactly what you are looking for.
The great ones, though, take it a step further than that. They help you refine and adjust your idea to make it something better than it would have been. And that's exactly what you did here. This part of Kristen's story will be so much better for your input!
For those interested in the story, the part that includes this scene will be done and ready to post in 2 or 3 weeks. This will featured in a trilogy called 'Magnetic Personality.'
If you'd like to get to know the character of Kristen, she is introduced here:
The Storm, Ground ZeroSeptember 2, 2016
“Ready to grind some sausage, Kristen?” Bob asked, holding up the five fingers of his right hand while he focused on the screen before him. Since she had started working at the station around a year prior, she had been partnered with the affable cameraman. When they had first met, she had joked that making live television was making sausage with pantyhose. You didn’t want to know how it was made. You didn’t want to eat it. You just hoped it would be pretty.
“I’ve got the pantyhose,” Kristen replied with a smile. “Just point that thing at some meat and let’s get grinding.”
“We’re on in ten,” he laughed, a wide smile beaming behind his bushy beard. Even though they had shared nearly this same exchange hundreds of times, it still brought a smile to the reporter’s face. Bob’s good will was contagious.
Holding the m and then this is her ongoing story:
Unwanted Attention - Chapter OneUnwanted Attention – Chapter One
A Pittsburgh After the Storm Superheroine Story featuring Kristen Meyers (Housewares)
September 3, 2017
Kristen took in a deep breath as she stepped out onto the sidewalk. The sun had set while she toiled away on the cycle inside the gym, but the streetlights and nearly full moon illuminated the street well enough. She opened her coat and fanned its sides back and forth, letting the chill night air wash over her body.
Fresh from her grueling sentence on the exercise bike, Kristen’s yoga pants and sports bra were still damp and her bare flesh glistened with a thin sheen of sweat. The cold breeze of her fanning coat brought up little goosebumps on her skin. The cold felt bracing, a shock to her system that soothed her aches and re-energized her.
Her reverie was interrupted by the ringing of her phone. Pulling it out of her p
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Rook-07 In reply to experimenter73 [2018-01-31 23:39:14 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Now that is a compliment! I'm honored to be described as "great ones". You had a great idea, it was my pleasure to help you refine it. I'm happy that you are satisfied with the commission.
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Doozer73 [2018-01-26 09:49:12 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderfully diabolical! Well done!
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Rook-07 In reply to Doozer73 [2018-01-31 23:36:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Yes, me and the commissioner really worked this one out to be exactly that, diabolical!
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MAD2g [2018-01-26 05:08:07 +0000 UTC]
That's just mean.
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Rook-07 In reply to MAD2g [2018-01-31 23:35:30 +0000 UTC]
But in a good way right?
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Rook-07 In reply to OakEgg [2018-01-31 23:35:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
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OakEgg In reply to Rook-07 [2018-02-03 10:28:42 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome
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gooeyness [2018-01-26 01:51:21 +0000 UTC]
haa flailbot is going to have fun
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tommerch [2018-01-26 01:51:17 +0000 UTC]
Glorb! Glurble! Gleeble-glup gegorgle glap!
Glorb!
Glub Globule
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TrystlsInk [2018-01-26 01:43:52 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. Love your illustration and the excerpt from the story...
However, I couldn't seem to find the story. Any more info you can share, like the name of the story.
Or maybe he's still working on it.
Anyway, great work.
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Rook-07 In reply to TrystlsInk [2018-01-31 23:34:46 +0000 UTC]
He hasn't posted it yet. Once he does, I'll be sure to link it from here.
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experimenter73 In reply to TrystlsInk [2018-01-26 12:14:15 +0000 UTC]
Hi there! Good to 'see' you again. As you guessed, the story is in progress. I think this section will be up and ready in 2-3 weeks.
If you'd like to get to know the character of Kristen, she is introduced here:
The Storm, Ground ZeroSeptember 2, 2016
“Ready to grind some sausage, Kristen?” Bob asked, holding up the five fingers of his right hand while he focused on the screen before him. Since she had started working at the station around a year prior, she had been partnered with the affable cameraman. When they had first met, she had joked that making live television was making sausage with pantyhose. You didn’t want to know how it was made. You didn’t want to eat it. You just hoped it would be pretty.
“I’ve got the pantyhose,” Kristen replied with a smile. “Just point that thing at some meat and let’s get grinding.”
“We’re on in ten,” he laughed, a wide smile beaming behind his bushy beard. Even though they had shared nearly this same exchange hundreds of times, it still brought a smile to the reporter’s face. Bob’s good will was contagious.
Holding the m and then this is her ongoing story:
Unwanted Attention - Chapter OneUnwanted Attention – Chapter One
A Pittsburgh After the Storm Superheroine Story featuring Kristen Meyers (Housewares)
September 3, 2017
Kristen took in a deep breath as she stepped out onto the sidewalk. The sun had set while she toiled away on the cycle inside the gym, but the streetlights and nearly full moon illuminated the street well enough. She opened her coat and fanned its sides back and forth, letting the chill night air wash over her body.
Fresh from her grueling sentence on the exercise bike, Kristen’s yoga pants and sports bra were still damp and her bare flesh glistened with a thin sheen of sweat. The cold breeze of her fanning coat brought up little goosebumps on her skin. The cold felt bracing, a shock to her system that soothed her aches and re-energized her.
Her reverie was interrupted by the ringing of her phone. Pulling it out of her p
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Dusk-sunlight [2018-01-25 22:53:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh my, That's wonderful torture!
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Rook-07 In reply to Dusk-sunlight [2018-01-30 18:37:16 +0000 UTC]
I know right? Mostly the commissioner’s idea with some Rook alterations.
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Dusk-sunlight In reply to Rook-07 [2018-01-31 03:51:37 +0000 UTC]
I think its wonderful! your significant other must love and hate you :]
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Rook-07 In reply to Dusk-sunlight [2018-01-31 23:46:11 +0000 UTC]
LOL! Well, her and me are pretty vanilla in real life. Every once and a while she asks to see what I've been drawing. She's supportive, but doesn't really get it.
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Dusk-sunlight In reply to Rook-07 [2018-02-01 01:24:39 +0000 UTC]
Ah, Sure I get that. As long as you two are happy thats what counts! :]
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